for Open Wounds10/16/2008 c20 
6Navaura
You're welcome. I liked this chapter better than the last one. It was really good. Sweet. Even had a few laughs. N-E-Ways, Derrick's lucky he's dead. He'd be in prison for trespassing, attempted rape, assault with a deadly weapon, violating parole, and all other types of things. She's bound to get a dismisal, because everything was in self defense. After they do lab analysis, Derrick's fingerprints are going to be on everything, blood work done, his dna will be matched for the bedroom scene, not to mention Jess and Ty's blood. Jess's blood still on the ropes, probably skid marks from the chairs. There's a stack of evidence up to the sky proving that Jess did it out of total defense, of both her and Ty. So, with all the evidence they'll pull, she needn't worry. She'll do just fine.
6NavauraYou're welcome. I liked this chapter better than the last one. It was really good. Sweet. Even had a few laughs. N-E-Ways, Derrick's lucky he's dead. He'd be in prison for trespassing, attempted rape, assault with a deadly weapon, violating parole, and all other types of things. She's bound to get a dismisal, because everything was in self defense. After they do lab analysis, Derrick's fingerprints are going to be on everything, blood work done, his dna will be matched for the bedroom scene, not to mention Jess and Ty's blood. Jess's blood still on the ropes, probably skid marks from the chairs. There's a stack of evidence up to the sky proving that Jess did it out of total defense, of both her and Ty. So, with all the evidence they'll pull, she needn't worry. She'll do just fine.
10/7/2008 c19 3cutepanda
Hi!
This is a really good sequel! I loved SaS and OW! Please update soon.
I cried a bit in SaS and in OW...I'm what you could say sentimental!
Really good storyline!
Good job and keep up the good work!
C
3cutepandaHi!
This is a really good sequel! I loved SaS and OW! Please update soon.
I cried a bit in SaS and in OW...I'm what you could say sentimental!
Really good storyline!
Good job and keep up the good work!
C
10/5/2008 c19 6Navaura
hey ms collins, just for future refrences, judging by the way this scene went with the cops, they didn't really look at any of the police reports filed when jess was in highschool, if there were any, nor did they look at trial transcripts. Had they done that, they would've known who Jess was and in a statement given to the police department, Jess is supposed to be told of her rights to an attorney. Also, they must have her relay the whole story in great detail, step by step. I know, it's kind of a mundane process, but it has to be done. I hated writing police reports in class. It was really tedious, but we had to do it. Now, I know how to write them, how to write scene reports (reports at the scene of the crime) and take thorough notes. I can't wait till I finish my classes. Otherwise, I love the way Jess yelled at the doctor and convinced him that she was Mrs. Landon. I don't think that was too much a lie, considering the fact she's closer to that title than anyone else at that moment.
6Navaurahey ms collins, just for future refrences, judging by the way this scene went with the cops, they didn't really look at any of the police reports filed when jess was in highschool, if there were any, nor did they look at trial transcripts. Had they done that, they would've known who Jess was and in a statement given to the police department, Jess is supposed to be told of her rights to an attorney. Also, they must have her relay the whole story in great detail, step by step. I know, it's kind of a mundane process, but it has to be done. I hated writing police reports in class. It was really tedious, but we had to do it. Now, I know how to write them, how to write scene reports (reports at the scene of the crime) and take thorough notes. I can't wait till I finish my classes. Otherwise, I love the way Jess yelled at the doctor and convinced him that she was Mrs. Landon. I don't think that was too much a lie, considering the fact she's closer to that title than anyone else at that moment.
10/3/2008 c1 michaeljacksonlovaa
WOW! I love your story! I've read secrets and Scars and it was uberly nice! If you're story was a book, I'd totally be the first to buy it! And if it was a movie, I'd Be pushing the crowd of people to get to the ticket booth. Every chapter if filled with cool emotions! PLEASE DON'T LET TY DIE! He was my favorite, but i have to admit, When I read about him and that model girl, I kind of hated him. BUt as he and Jess become closer again, I realized he was so caring. That's why I don't want you to make him die! You can't! I'll cry BIG, BIG alligator tears! I'm going to start cyring if you don't update faster, tOO! wah! I hate DEREK! LONG LIVE TY! LOL. I'm so crazy. I don't know how my friends live with it... Rememebr, don't forget. I'll really cry big alligator tears if you make him DIE. =) YOu're story deserves a long review becasue it's really GOOD. Have you thought of writing songs, lately? You're really good at it. THe lyrics are so meaningful. Anyways, I hope to be reading more pretty soon! mkay?
PEACE OUT! =)
WOW! I love your story! I've read secrets and Scars and it was uberly nice! If you're story was a book, I'd totally be the first to buy it! And if it was a movie, I'd Be pushing the crowd of people to get to the ticket booth. Every chapter if filled with cool emotions! PLEASE DON'T LET TY DIE! He was my favorite, but i have to admit, When I read about him and that model girl, I kind of hated him. BUt as he and Jess become closer again, I realized he was so caring. That's why I don't want you to make him die! You can't! I'll cry BIG, BIG alligator tears! I'm going to start cyring if you don't update faster, tOO! wah! I hate DEREK! LONG LIVE TY! LOL. I'm so crazy. I don't know how my friends live with it... Rememebr, don't forget. I'll really cry big alligator tears if you make him DIE. =) YOu're story deserves a long review becasue it's really GOOD. Have you thought of writing songs, lately? You're really good at it. THe lyrics are so meaningful. Anyways, I hope to be reading more pretty soon! mkay?
PEACE OUT! =)
10/3/2008 c18 Navaura
I guess not ms liz. That would've been too easy. Derek was a trip though. He comes to their house, drunk first of all, tie them up, leave them tied, and then he falls asleep. Yeah, I'd say he got serious issues. I suppose there's one last final chapter. I rather think the story ended rather quickly, but I can understand that. Sometimes I get so tired of writing, that I do stuff like that on purpose!
"You thought I was goner huh? Up and left ms collins. Nope, Just had a lot of other stuff to take care of before there was free time. Well, great two chapters,
Navaura
I guess not ms liz. That would've been too easy. Derek was a trip though. He comes to their house, drunk first of all, tie them up, leave them tied, and then he falls asleep. Yeah, I'd say he got serious issues. I suppose there's one last final chapter. I rather think the story ended rather quickly, but I can understand that. Sometimes I get so tired of writing, that I do stuff like that on purpose!
"You thought I was goner huh? Up and left ms collins. Nope, Just had a lot of other stuff to take care of before there was free time. Well, great two chapters,
Navaura
9/30/2008 c18 Becky
ok, i just want to say, i don't usually read stories that aren't done yet, for the sole reason that some never get done. That being said, I really got into this story. It's great and i really hope you update soon!
ok, i just want to say, i don't usually read stories that aren't done yet, for the sole reason that some never get done. That being said, I really got into this story. It's great and i really hope you update soon!
9/27/2008 c18 9Manga Girl Lover
arrgh why? Why did you have to stop there! no this means you've GOTTA post up another chapter MUCH sooner than last time! argh!
9Manga Girl Loverarrgh why? Why did you have to stop there! no this means you've GOTTA post up another chapter MUCH sooner than last time! argh!
9/27/2008 c18 2Athousandyellodaisies08
you're mean! he better not die or else I might cry. Update again soon please!
2Athousandyellodaisies08you're mean! he better not die or else I might cry. Update again soon please!
9/23/2008 c17 2StillXxXbreathing
I absolutely love OW and SaS. I'm glad that Jessie and Ty got together for real, Derek is still a jerk! You write with such enthusiasm and description that I can actually picture it all happening. This is my first review so I don't really know what to say! but keep up the AMAZING work!
2StillXxXbreathingI absolutely love OW and SaS. I'm glad that Jessie and Ty got together for real, Derek is still a jerk! You write with such enthusiasm and description that I can actually picture it all happening. This is my first review so I don't really know what to say! but keep up the AMAZING work!
9/23/2008 c17 2Athousandyellodaisies08
you're killin me smalls! you NEED to update soon! this is a life or death situation! THIS IS NOT A DRILL! update soon please!
2Athousandyellodaisies08you're killin me smalls! you NEED to update soon! this is a life or death situation! THIS IS NOT A DRILL! update soon please!
9/23/2008 c17 Kiana Gee
Ok lookk! Best chapter yet. I mean almost had me in tears ! LINK! He almost died...well jess and ty are about to die lol...but that can't really happen. I can't wait to see what you've got planned how they're gonna escape if they do. soo here's a review hopefully this makes you post a new chapter 5 days before you usually do. This story is addicting IF YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED!. Soo this is the end of the comment from one ur biggest fans. PLEASE writee like your life depends on it =D
Ok lookk! Best chapter yet. I mean almost had me in tears ! LINK! He almost died...well jess and ty are about to die lol...but that can't really happen. I can't wait to see what you've got planned how they're gonna escape if they do. soo here's a review hopefully this makes you post a new chapter 5 days before you usually do. This story is addicting IF YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED!. Soo this is the end of the comment from one ur biggest fans. PLEASE writee like your life depends on it =D
9/23/2008 c17 choc me
Oh! Ew! The kissing part reminded me of Jasmine kissing Jafar in Aladdin! Anyway...what kind of cliffhanger is that? Update soon :)
Oh! Ew! The kissing part reminded me of Jasmine kissing Jafar in Aladdin! Anyway...what kind of cliffhanger is that? Update soon :)