for Open Wounds8/20/2008 c11 
2Classychik
this is an awesome story, I love this sequel just as much as the first story. Update soon! :)
ClasSy CHiK!:D
2Classychikthis is an awesome story, I love this sequel just as much as the first story. Update soon! :)
ClasSy CHiK!:D
8/19/2008 c11 1Jaeiyola
Give it in, Jessie! And go Ty for being so awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
1JaeiyolaGive it in, Jessie! And go Ty for being so awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/15/2008 c10 6Navaura
Hey, Ms. Collins, you had a couple of mistakes in this chapter. Something akin to spelling.
I don't think Jess realizes how much she unwinds around ty. He makes her relax and be comfortable around her surroundings. That's what's going to trip her up again. She's going to trip out when she discovers her fears aren't worth holding on to.
That's all they are, are fears. She doesn't want to be hurt, so she uses him being a musician as an excuse. Well, I have to go and I love the chapter. I am along for the ride on this one.
Navaura~
6NavauraHey, Ms. Collins, you had a couple of mistakes in this chapter. Something akin to spelling.
I don't think Jess realizes how much she unwinds around ty. He makes her relax and be comfortable around her surroundings. That's what's going to trip her up again. She's going to trip out when she discovers her fears aren't worth holding on to.
That's all they are, are fears. She doesn't want to be hurt, so she uses him being a musician as an excuse. Well, I have to go and I love the chapter. I am along for the ride on this one.
Navaura~
8/14/2008 c10 1Jaeiyola
Yay! That was enjoyable. I'm glad Jess and Ty are "semi"-together. It won't be long soon until they are offically together. Mwhahahaha. They're such a cute couple, and I hate seeing Ty suffering like that.
Oohh, that mysterious car. Sounds dangerous. (Or it could just be my imagination.)
Can't wait for more. :)
1JaeiyolaYay! That was enjoyable. I'm glad Jess and Ty are "semi"-together. It won't be long soon until they are offically together. Mwhahahaha. They're such a cute couple, and I hate seeing Ty suffering like that.
Oohh, that mysterious car. Sounds dangerous. (Or it could just be my imagination.)
Can't wait for more. :)
8/10/2008 c9 1ashtonaesthetic
Please hurry with an update. Your story has kept me up all night trying to read all of it. So what? This may be a rough chapter but all books have them. Haven't you ever noticed? It's just a way of life for stories I guess. haha. Please update soon. I cant wait to read what happens. Oh and yeah about the no ideas thing... You probably just have a bit of writers block. I always just take a brek, experience some things and that helps... ALOT. And if that doesn't work, go somewhere quiet where the enviroment just screams creativity. That always gets the mind turning.
1ashtonaestheticPlease hurry with an update. Your story has kept me up all night trying to read all of it. So what? This may be a rough chapter but all books have them. Haven't you ever noticed? It's just a way of life for stories I guess. haha. Please update soon. I cant wait to read what happens. Oh and yeah about the no ideas thing... You probably just have a bit of writers block. I always just take a brek, experience some things and that helps... ALOT. And if that doesn't work, go somewhere quiet where the enviroment just screams creativity. That always gets the mind turning.
8/10/2008 c9 6Navaura
It was a needed chapter, considering the fact that Jess's mother was getting married and all. There was nothing more to be done with Ty and Jess, considering that Jess decided she wasn't going to be with Ty. Chill out and relax, your story's going at the right pace. Don't worry about the ideas, they will come. Sometimes, you have to get through the hard chapters, in order to get a complete thought worked out. So, youre doing fine.
Navaura~
6NavauraIt was a needed chapter, considering the fact that Jess's mother was getting married and all. There was nothing more to be done with Ty and Jess, considering that Jess decided she wasn't going to be with Ty. Chill out and relax, your story's going at the right pace. Don't worry about the ideas, they will come. Sometimes, you have to get through the hard chapters, in order to get a complete thought worked out. So, youre doing fine.
Navaura~
8/3/2008 c8 Navaura
I may seem heartless for this one, but, I don't feel sorry for Mike. Maybe I should. I don't know, but I feel more relieved myself because Jessi was honest with him, which created more respect for her from me.(Mike wouldn't get his heart broke in the end. That is an inevitable conclusion.) Atleast she has the guts to say what she needed too. I almost swooned when I read the part where Ty's determination shined through. Jess+ Ty forever. I like that, because it shows his seriousness, when going after the girl he really wants. So, yay!
Two thumbs up for Ty. I also like Jess's friend. She's pretty cool.
So, congrats on chapter eight!
I may seem heartless for this one, but, I don't feel sorry for Mike. Maybe I should. I don't know, but I feel more relieved myself because Jessi was honest with him, which created more respect for her from me.(Mike wouldn't get his heart broke in the end. That is an inevitable conclusion.) Atleast she has the guts to say what she needed too. I almost swooned when I read the part where Ty's determination shined through. Jess+ Ty forever. I like that, because it shows his seriousness, when going after the girl he really wants. So, yay!
Two thumbs up for Ty. I also like Jess's friend. She's pretty cool.
So, congrats on chapter eight!
7/30/2008 c7 LazyLogger
aw i want them 2gether :(
aw i want them 2gether :(
7/30/2008 c7 sarah
awseome chppies =]
awseome chppies =]
7/29/2008 c7 Navaura
I love this chapter, don't worry about me, I'm too solid-stuck in the real life to argue with that- in life to believe a fairy tale ending. I just wish to encourage you to keep it as real as possible, no fancy fickles if you know what I mean. I absolutely Love Ty's declaration of love for Jess. I also liked the fact that she's willing to give up what she wants, for what he wants. It tells you the maturity of her character. When a woman really loves a man, she's willing to let go of him, even if it means being hurt in the process. All's well, that ends well, if that makes any sense. I have a question:
How is it that you know where to put every moment in your story where it's supposed to be?
Food for thought.
This was a beautiful chapter. I could feel every emotion the characters felt. Which means, this chapter had a lot of depth to it!
#1 fan,
Navaura
I love this chapter, don't worry about me, I'm too solid-stuck in the real life to argue with that- in life to believe a fairy tale ending. I just wish to encourage you to keep it as real as possible, no fancy fickles if you know what I mean. I absolutely Love Ty's declaration of love for Jess. I also liked the fact that she's willing to give up what she wants, for what he wants. It tells you the maturity of her character. When a woman really loves a man, she's willing to let go of him, even if it means being hurt in the process. All's well, that ends well, if that makes any sense. I have a question:
How is it that you know where to put every moment in your story where it's supposed to be?
Food for thought.
This was a beautiful chapter. I could feel every emotion the characters felt. Which means, this chapter had a lot of depth to it!
#1 fan,
Navaura
7/28/2008 c6 Unknown
awesome! i can't wait to read the next chapter!
awesome! i can't wait to read the next chapter!
7/27/2008 c6 Navaura
I got one thing to say, YOU BETTER FINISH THIS STORY, IF YOU DON'T, I MIGHT DIE!11
THIS CHAPTER WAS NOT TOO LONG. I WAS HOPING THEY'D MEET IN THIS CHAPTER.
BUT IT'S GOOD, REALLY GOOD, EXCEPT FOR A FEW MISTAKES MADE AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER. THE USUAL, ONE LEFT OUT LETTER, COMMA PLACEMENT, STUFF LIKE THAT, BUT AWESOME!
I LOVE IT, AND AS FOR YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN, I LOOK FOR AN UPDATE EVERY DAY. I CHECK THE MAIL HOPING FOR AN UPDATE, SO HAH!
YOU GOTTA FINISH. TRUST ME, IT'S WORTH IT
#1 FAN
NAVAURA~
I got one thing to say, YOU BETTER FINISH THIS STORY, IF YOU DON'T, I MIGHT DIE!11
THIS CHAPTER WAS NOT TOO LONG. I WAS HOPING THEY'D MEET IN THIS CHAPTER.
BUT IT'S GOOD, REALLY GOOD, EXCEPT FOR A FEW MISTAKES MADE AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTER. THE USUAL, ONE LEFT OUT LETTER, COMMA PLACEMENT, STUFF LIKE THAT, BUT AWESOME!
I LOVE IT, AND AS FOR YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN, I LOOK FOR AN UPDATE EVERY DAY. I CHECK THE MAIL HOPING FOR AN UPDATE, SO HAH!
YOU GOTTA FINISH. TRUST ME, IT'S WORTH IT
#1 FAN
NAVAURA~
7/25/2008 c5 Navaura
aw, you're cute! It's a pleasure reading your work, I put you on my list of favorites, this chapter is a tear jerker as far as ty is concerned, and word from the wise, sometimes the stories that get less reviews are worth far more than those that do. I have been working on my story for two years and as far as I can tell, there's been more than a hundred hits for the story,but only seven reviews, if you include my own review. I like to review my work to see what it looks like on paper.
You are a fantastic writer, Captivation should be your motivation. I wish you luck, and as always, I'm going to be giving feed back. It's so good, that I hardly notice any mistakes that you make. I guess I don't read it for mistakes. Keep up the awesome work,
Navaura
aw, you're cute! It's a pleasure reading your work, I put you on my list of favorites, this chapter is a tear jerker as far as ty is concerned, and word from the wise, sometimes the stories that get less reviews are worth far more than those that do. I have been working on my story for two years and as far as I can tell, there's been more than a hundred hits for the story,but only seven reviews, if you include my own review. I like to review my work to see what it looks like on paper.
You are a fantastic writer, Captivation should be your motivation. I wish you luck, and as always, I'm going to be giving feed back. It's so good, that I hardly notice any mistakes that you make. I guess I don't read it for mistakes. Keep up the awesome work,
Navaura
7/25/2008 c5 LazyLogger
really really realy good!
update
really really realy good!
update