for Lackluster5/24/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I really like the first stanza because of the alliteration. The punctuation and capitalization are a bit all over the place, I might work on that. I like the piece a lot though, its really relatable and well done.
PS If youre bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
612simpleplan13I really like the first stanza because of the alliteration. The punctuation and capitalization are a bit all over the place, I might work on that. I like the piece a lot though, its really relatable and well done.
PS If youre bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
5/13/2008 c1 115Random-Idiocity
This was excellent, I especially love the second stanza. And 'sometimes faith is well-deserved so trust more than your sight' that is very true. If only some people weren't so quick to judge. Wonderful job on this. Keep it Up!
115Random-IdiocityThis was excellent, I especially love the second stanza. And 'sometimes faith is well-deserved so trust more than your sight' that is very true. If only some people weren't so quick to judge. Wonderful job on this. Keep it Up!