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3/20/2009 c1 Sir Pebbles
Woah. Might I just say how much I love the last line?

This is an cool poem, telling a very interesting and detailed - to an extent - story. Well done!
1/31/2009 c1 9Narq
Well written. I loved your rhyme and rhythm. I simply adored the ending, that ray of hope indicated in the sunrise. Great job to a wonderful writer!
5/15/2008 c1 127Eirien
Well written, very musical in its language, rhyme and rhythm. Reminded me of the era of Romanticism, or Goethes "Die Leiden des jungen Werther", also of the concept of the Wandering Jew. I like the ending, that ray of hope indicated in the sunrise. That brought to mind the song "Crystal River" by the band Wedding Party, where the singer tells of his brother's suicide and how he nevertheless went to heaven: "He was the best friend anyone could have had, the reason he did what he did was cause he hurt so bad, and I know he's in heaven, no longer living in pain" etc.

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