for two reasons out of many11/6/2012 c1 
2heyitsstupidme
Beautiful. It's short, but the few words really say a lot.
I love it. :)
2heyitsstupidmeBeautiful. It's short, but the few words really say a lot.
I love it. :)
9/30/2008 c1 167all you need is oxygen
i love this.
i love how the ungirly knees seem to mean so much more.
"you gave me a look which clearly meant you were interested/i stared at my shoes which clearly meant i was interested too". those lines were perfect.
167all you need is oxygeni love this.
i love how the ungirly knees seem to mean so much more.
"you gave me a look which clearly meant you were interested/i stared at my shoes which clearly meant i was interested too". those lines were perfect.
7/7/2008 c1 1Kneecap
Last line was a definite clincher.
Yep. I liked the whole 'missed opportunity' thing. The last line really hammered things in.
Yeah, yeah, yeah, can't think of much else to say now...I've reviewed everything of yours.
Guh. I know this is unrelated, but you should really write a story one day. 'The Call' was just incredible. It knocked me over backwards (metaphorically). Yeah. Innit, tschuss sweetie! Sorry I didn't favourite any of your poems, but I liked your oneshots more.
1KneecapLast line was a definite clincher.
Yep. I liked the whole 'missed opportunity' thing. The last line really hammered things in.
Yeah, yeah, yeah, can't think of much else to say now...I've reviewed everything of yours.
Guh. I know this is unrelated, but you should really write a story one day. 'The Call' was just incredible. It knocked me over backwards (metaphorically). Yeah. Innit, tschuss sweetie! Sorry I didn't favourite any of your poems, but I liked your oneshots more.
6/16/2008 c1 i'd delete this if possible
-low whistle- Ouch. I can relate to that, the regret, the missed shot. I love how you tied the 'staring at your shoes' type of interested in at the end. I think this was really clever.
-low whistle- Ouch. I can relate to that, the regret, the missed shot. I love how you tied the 'staring at your shoes' type of interested in at the end. I think this was really clever.