for Halfling: Dawn8/20/2009 c1 Talon378
This was a pretty good story, thanks for sharing with us...
This was a pretty good story, thanks for sharing with us...
9/5/2008 c1 
1Moon Frost
I can't wait to see what happens. Seriously. This is very well written. The clarity of it just makes it that much more suspenseful. Please continue soon!
1Moon FrostI can't wait to see what happens. Seriously. This is very well written. The clarity of it just makes it that much more suspenseful. Please continue soon!
6/4/2008 c1 16Dolvich
jadedmari-
I like the glimpses you keep giving from this world of yours. Your description is good, and it makes me want to read more.
I know you must have more like this. Show us.
Well done.
16Dolvichjadedmari-
I like the glimpses you keep giving from this world of yours. Your description is good, and it makes me want to read more.
I know you must have more like this. Show us.
Well done.
6/1/2008 c1 5Insanity Engine
Very interesting so far. The amount of detail in the first paragraph was what really drew me in, though at times I felt there was a bit too much detail. Nevertheless the concept is interesting. I'm curious as to the child's nature. He sounds like he's possessed or something.
5Insanity EngineVery interesting so far. The amount of detail in the first paragraph was what really drew me in, though at times I felt there was a bit too much detail. Nevertheless the concept is interesting. I'm curious as to the child's nature. He sounds like he's possessed or something.