for Not Necessarily Unreachable5/5/2012 c6 Abigail
Hey, are you still writing?
Hey, are you still writing?
6/23/2009 c1 
2ishani acuinatum.ashley
hi
i really like ur story...its diffrent and it's very good as wel...
ishani
xx`
2ishani acuinatum.ashleyhi
i really like ur story...its diffrent and it's very good as wel...
ishani
xx`
10/13/2008 c5 JadeDream
i know i shouldnt...but i feel bad for Mack! i kinda like him, yea i know hes a cheater and i would have gotten rid of him too lol but still!
update soon! cant wait to read the next chapter
i know i shouldnt...but i feel bad for Mack! i kinda like him, yea i know hes a cheater and i would have gotten rid of him too lol but still!
update soon! cant wait to read the next chapter
8/11/2008 c2 pinkeclipse
at least alex realizes it was his fault...will the band get another chance to make it big time?
at least alex realizes it was his fault...will the band get another chance to make it big time?
8/6/2008 c5 H i b o u P i e
Hm... kinda just sorta fell on this story, random clicks can get you very far :) I felt compelled for some reason to finish the entire story in one sitting. -mission accomplished-
One thing that kept playing in the back of my mind was the song Energy by Keri Hilson for Gina and Mack... My random thoughts know no bounds :D
Very good story and plot development... I was furiously clicking away at the pages to get to the end and come to some kind of conclusion for this. Hm :/ i REALLY wanna see how Alex and Gina progress, because I think he's a sweetheart. But then again, for Mack I see my favorite singer in his hairstyle -silly me- (but not in his slutty little crap attitude).
Anyway, I'll patiently wait for the next chapter *please don't take to long* :)
Hm... kinda just sorta fell on this story, random clicks can get you very far :) I felt compelled for some reason to finish the entire story in one sitting. -mission accomplished-
One thing that kept playing in the back of my mind was the song Energy by Keri Hilson for Gina and Mack... My random thoughts know no bounds :D
Very good story and plot development... I was furiously clicking away at the pages to get to the end and come to some kind of conclusion for this. Hm :/ i REALLY wanna see how Alex and Gina progress, because I think he's a sweetheart. But then again, for Mack I see my favorite singer in his hairstyle -silly me- (but not in his slutty little crap attitude).
Anyway, I'll patiently wait for the next chapter *please don't take to long* :)
8/6/2008 c5 Abigail Night
I want her to somehow get back at MAck, I mean, come on, sayin 'I love you' was a low blow. I want Mack to want her back bad but she wont come back because she's in love with Alex! I love Alex, he rocks. :)
I want her to somehow get back at MAck, I mean, come on, sayin 'I love you' was a low blow. I want Mack to want her back bad but she wont come back because she's in love with Alex! I love Alex, he rocks. :)
7/28/2008 c4 13Faded Soulfire
I've been reading this since chapter one, but I realized that I didn't review. Not even once. So I had to ammend that and let you know that I really like you're writing style. I like the story, the characters, and everything inbetween. I particularly love the name Mack, so it's interesting to see him as the 'bad guy'. Also, I like that this is centered around music, too.
About the whole boyfriend/name issue: I think you might want to do a name change if Alex's character is at stake. If you're worried you might mix your Alex with the fictional Alex, then maybe it would be a good idea. I know that I can't write characters with certain names because they automatically remind me of another person. So, if you believe that keeping the name Alex won't put your character at risk in any way, then I see no problem with keeping it. Well, I hope I was a little help.
Faded Soulfire
13Faded SoulfireI've been reading this since chapter one, but I realized that I didn't review. Not even once. So I had to ammend that and let you know that I really like you're writing style. I like the story, the characters, and everything inbetween. I particularly love the name Mack, so it's interesting to see him as the 'bad guy'. Also, I like that this is centered around music, too.
About the whole boyfriend/name issue: I think you might want to do a name change if Alex's character is at stake. If you're worried you might mix your Alex with the fictional Alex, then maybe it would be a good idea. I know that I can't write characters with certain names because they automatically remind me of another person. So, if you believe that keeping the name Alex won't put your character at risk in any way, then I see no problem with keeping it. Well, I hope I was a little help.
Faded Soulfire