for My Must5/18/2008 c1 
50Eve's Deception
i loved this, but the very last word of the very last line completely lost me. so i read it again and decided that last "must" didn't do the beauty of this piece justice.
what do you think?
50Eve's Deceptioni loved this, but the very last word of the very last line completely lost me. so i read it again and decided that last "must" didn't do the beauty of this piece justice.
what do you think?
5/18/2008 c1 lymli
the first verse I think it was touching and true about this society where material things are more important, good poem.
the first verse I think it was touching and true about this society where material things are more important, good poem.