for My Summer at Skinny Camp6/8/2008 c2 itybitytitycommitie
oh.
hehe will :) cant wait 4 the next chapy
oh.
hehe will :) cant wait 4 the next chapy
6/7/2008 c2 pauline
ths stry seems really gud. please update asap. i no u have other stories.. which r great aswell :) but yer dont leave us readers hanging XD
ths stry seems really gud. please update asap. i no u have other stories.. which r great aswell :) but yer dont leave us readers hanging XD
6/7/2008 c2 THERESE
UPDATE! IM HOOKED ALREADY
ILY THERESE
UPDATE! IM HOOKED ALREADY
ILY THERESE
6/7/2008 c2 Carol
aww lily.. her lil sis! what happened?
i wanna no lol!
update!
ooh i suspect it may get a lil teary?
Carol xo.
aww lily.. her lil sis! what happened?
i wanna no lol!
update!
ooh i suspect it may get a lil teary?
Carol xo.
6/7/2008 c2 annon111
oh looks interesting!
UPDATE!
oh looks interesting!
UPDATE!
6/7/2008 c2 Sarah
hey
wow i really like your stories!
my fav wud have 2 be a year to live and love :)
but i also really like baby sitting dramas and this one!
at first i was like hm skinny camp... but no the 1st chappy is up i am quite interested! please update son!
hey
wow i really like your stories!
my fav wud have 2 be a year to live and love :)
but i also really like baby sitting dramas and this one!
at first i was like hm skinny camp... but no the 1st chappy is up i am quite interested! please update son!
6/7/2008 c2 the.closet.writer
what happened to Lily?
hm...i like this chappie...
cant wait for more Will and Sarah's interactions!
keep on writing!
what happened to Lily?
hm...i like this chappie...
cant wait for more Will and Sarah's interactions!
keep on writing!
6/6/2008 c2 uponatyme
I thought I wouldn't like your writing style, that it would jump all over the place, but I'm actually enjoying it! You keep it constant, which gives the whole story a Catcher in the Rye kind of feel. The only thing I would suggest to enhance it further is to quit using quotes when you use made-up words like 'suckish.' If you treat them as real words, the reader will too, and that'll help solidify the character's point of view in the reader's mind. Just an opinion!
Keep up the good work!
I thought I wouldn't like your writing style, that it would jump all over the place, but I'm actually enjoying it! You keep it constant, which gives the whole story a Catcher in the Rye kind of feel. The only thing I would suggest to enhance it further is to quit using quotes when you use made-up words like 'suckish.' If you treat them as real words, the reader will too, and that'll help solidify the character's point of view in the reader's mind. Just an opinion!
Keep up the good work!
6/6/2008 c2 centenarian
Well, the idea of a Skinny camp is funny. But yeah, personally I wouldn't want to go there, I like my skinny self but well, if you did want to get fat, maybe just gorging yourself on food 24/7 will be enough. yeah...but anyways, this seems like a good plot. The writing seems okay. Update soon.
Well, the idea of a Skinny camp is funny. But yeah, personally I wouldn't want to go there, I like my skinny self but well, if you did want to get fat, maybe just gorging yourself on food 24/7 will be enough. yeah...but anyways, this seems like a good plot. The writing seems okay. Update soon.
5/21/2008 c1 the.closet.writer
wow!nice prologue! :D
i like the idea of summer camp for skinnies!
cant wait for your next update!
wow!nice prologue! :D
i like the idea of summer camp for skinnies!
cant wait for your next update!
5/20/2008 c1 addicted2storiz
I'm interested- so that's good :D I'd love to read the rest; feel free to update soon. And um... is there seriously a skinny camp? Because then I need to go there right now...
I'm interested- so that's good :D I'd love to read the rest; feel free to update soon. And um... is there seriously a skinny camp? Because then I need to go there right now...
5/20/2008 c1 
47Katenheimer
Excellent and interesting concept. It makes me realize that I sometimes take for granted my "average" weight. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.
47KatenheimerExcellent and interesting concept. It makes me realize that I sometimes take for granted my "average" weight. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.