for My Summer Love11/8/2012 c1 heal me forever
super ggod
Life was all about forgiveness, and love. For you to be able to love you need to learn to trust and forgive. Two years was enough time for me to get over Greg, but I couldn't, because I was in love. And love my friends, has a weird way of working out. MY FAV WORDS !
super ggod
Life was all about forgiveness, and love. For you to be able to love you need to learn to trust and forgive. Two years was enough time for me to get over Greg, but I couldn't, because I was in love. And love my friends, has a weird way of working out. MY FAV WORDS !
11/28/2008 c1 
2CrossMyHeart
You’re a city girl, which (With?) so much going on for you
YAY! its so cute!
XxCrossMyHeartxX
2CrossMyHeartYou’re a city girl, which (With?) so much going on for you
YAY! its so cute!
XxCrossMyHeartxX
11/12/2008 c1 13blurrylights
Hm...the ending was interesting. I liked the plot and the characters, but the ending seemed a bit abrupt. But good job! :)
13blurrylightsHm...the ending was interesting. I liked the plot and the characters, but the ending seemed a bit abrupt. But good job! :)
11/6/2008 c1 7g.na
u should at a little more at the end about what happens to them
really cute story!
7g.nau should at a little more at the end about what happens to them
really cute story!
10/9/2008 c1 1JoiZ. D
The ending was okay, not too shaby. I loved the flashback a lot, (probably because I like angsty stuff, ehehehe) the way you put Meg's sorrowness and stuff. :)
Good work!
1JoiZ. DThe ending was okay, not too shaby. I loved the flashback a lot, (probably because I like angsty stuff, ehehehe) the way you put Meg's sorrowness and stuff. :)
Good work!
9/7/2008 c1 3starlit x sky
Aww, I'm really glad they met up.
It was really cute, and well written.
Great job
3starlit x skyAww, I'm really glad they met up.
It was really cute, and well written.
Great job
8/4/2008 c1 7choirluvr
that was so cool. I think you might've made the ending a little longer though. But if you went into more detail about the 1st summer and had a more descriptive ending you could make it a book. one of those sweet, sappy love stories. I think this is the best story line of all of your stuff on fictionpress. great job! :)
7choirluvrthat was so cool. I think you might've made the ending a little longer though. But if you went into more detail about the 1st summer and had a more descriptive ending you could make it a book. one of those sweet, sappy love stories. I think this is the best story line of all of your stuff on fictionpress. great job! :)
5/20/2008 c1 3acapella33
Cute!
I think the ending's fine. It's gives you space for imagination, and the writing's good.
Just one tip- "CHocolate-eyed love" might be a bit much.
=)
3acapella33Cute!
I think the ending's fine. It's gives you space for imagination, and the writing's good.
Just one tip- "CHocolate-eyed love" might be a bit much.
=)