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9/23/2008 c1 8Idiot Savante
Overall, I liked your five lines of personification, however, with the title being "Storm", I don't see how roses are relevant.

Also, I'm not sure if the first line is meant to repeat, but maybe subtract that?

This piece flowed well, was short and to the point, and, as I've already said, you did good on personifying a storm.
7/1/2008 c1 socks-lost
I like it. I think you did really good on the personification thing. Its almost like a different side of thunderstorms. When I think of them its like loud crashing destructive, but this its delicate. Nice. Anywho, keep up the good work!
5/21/2008 c1 62Kiwi-kiwi6
Beautiful personification. Ooh, I love big words. They make me sound smart! No, really. I love it.

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