for Embrace8/27/2008 c1 
29C.Gholy
Very sad and very touching. I love the last line. This tragic story was beautifully written and was a pleasure to read.
29C.GholyVery sad and very touching. I love the last line. This tragic story was beautifully written and was a pleasure to read.
5/23/2008 c1 1Luckyducky13
The title is so perfect for this story. I like the original names. The story makes me want to know why he was killed and if Lucca's going to be safe. Very intriguing.
One piece of con-crit. If Lucca can come meet her after waking up, why couldn't he have gone earlier?
1Luckyducky13The title is so perfect for this story. I like the original names. The story makes me want to know why he was killed and if Lucca's going to be safe. Very intriguing.
One piece of con-crit. If Lucca can come meet her after waking up, why couldn't he have gone earlier?