for An Evening Rendezvous1/24/2014 c1 Jess
Cute story :-)
Cute story :-)
1/21/2011 c1 
5U MadeMyLifeComplete
I know you said its a one shot but god i wish there was more and another chapter because when i read it i could feel my heart pounding in my chest while a read and I also felt my breathing, that was the first time that's happened when reading a story.
I just wish you would turn it into a more then a one shot :(
I love it and i think im going to read more of your stories!
-U MadeMyLifeComplete-
5U MadeMyLifeCompleteI know you said its a one shot but god i wish there was more and another chapter because when i read it i could feel my heart pounding in my chest while a read and I also felt my breathing, that was the first time that's happened when reading a story.
I just wish you would turn it into a more then a one shot :(
I love it and i think im going to read more of your stories!
-U MadeMyLifeComplete-
10/25/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
This is good for your first one shot! Creative (cliche, yes, but still creative) and cute. You could have snarkier titles, but to each her own, I guess. (: Kudos to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnThis is good for your first one shot! Creative (cliche, yes, but still creative) and cute. You could have snarkier titles, but to each her own, I guess. (: Kudos to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:
10/24/2008 c1 2artistic dreamer
aw this is so cute! as corny as that dating service is, i totally loved it! :D kylie is so cute! and nate too! hahaha :D
rachel :D
2artistic dreameraw this is so cute! as corny as that dating service is, i totally loved it! :D kylie is so cute! and nate too! hahaha :D
rachel :D
8/6/2008 c1 4GrannyP
Aw, that was really cute! The whole matchmaking program was interesting; I have never heard of such a thing that would actually work, but I like the concept. The ending was very cute, with a sweet little moment. Looks like the service worked after all, just the way it was supposed to! She probably wouldn't have noticed him at all if she hadn't fallen down the stairs onto him. Haha... that sounds like something embarrassing I would do.
Great work!
4GrannyPAw, that was really cute! The whole matchmaking program was interesting; I have never heard of such a thing that would actually work, but I like the concept. The ending was very cute, with a sweet little moment. Looks like the service worked after all, just the way it was supposed to! She probably wouldn't have noticed him at all if she hadn't fallen down the stairs onto him. Haha... that sounds like something embarrassing I would do.
Great work!
7/3/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Sweet story. ^^ I laughed most of the time. It was enjoyable. Nice work. Keep writing!
Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrSweet story. ^^ I laughed most of the time. It was enjoyable. Nice work. Keep writing!
Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
~Twilight Starr~
5/24/2008 c1 3Tasha Mandaire
That was absolutely cute! First they weren't exactly enthusiastic (sp?) about the date, then he taking her to movies and the beach and him going unconscious all made the oneshot so cute and sweet! I hope you write more like this. ^.^
Laterz...
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3Tasha MandaireThat was absolutely cute! First they weren't exactly enthusiastic (sp?) about the date, then he taking her to movies and the beach and him going unconscious all made the oneshot so cute and sweet! I hope you write more like this. ^.^
Laterz...
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