for Posthuman Herald5/31/2008 c3 
3Kotuso
This was another good chapter filled with descriptions aplenty. I only wish that it was a tad bit longer.
3KotusoThis was another good chapter filled with descriptions aplenty. I only wish that it was a tad bit longer.
5/29/2008 c2 Kotuso
This is looking very good so far. It seems very thought out and it seems to of been executed in a logical fashion, unlike my stories, which are made up on the go and vary wildly in pace.
This is looking very good so far. It seems very thought out and it seems to of been executed in a logical fashion, unlike my stories, which are made up on the go and vary wildly in pace.
5/28/2008 c3 6The Crazy Talk Kid
An interesting couple of chapters. These zones are rather intriguing, a force that mutates animals and turns plants into geometrical shapes. Its rather intriguing. No problems I notice but the soldiers seem a little quiet, there's got to be one loudmouth in the group.
Kdh.
6The Crazy Talk KidAn interesting couple of chapters. These zones are rather intriguing, a force that mutates animals and turns plants into geometrical shapes. Its rather intriguing. No problems I notice but the soldiers seem a little quiet, there's got to be one loudmouth in the group.
Kdh.
5/25/2008 c1 3Kent Edwins
For some reason, this reminds me of starcraft meets hamlet. Tight prose. You throw the reader right into the action, which works great for a prologue. Is this going to be its own story, a one-shot thing, perhaps dropping a hint for tabernacle, or is it simply a daily writing exercise?
3Kent EdwinsFor some reason, this reminds me of starcraft meets hamlet. Tight prose. You throw the reader right into the action, which works great for a prologue. Is this going to be its own story, a one-shot thing, perhaps dropping a hint for tabernacle, or is it simply a daily writing exercise?
5/25/2008 c1 6The Crazy Talk Kid
Nothing like a bolt to the head to start off a story. I'm interested so far and it looks okay gramatically and such.
~Kdh.
6The Crazy Talk KidNothing like a bolt to the head to start off a story. I'm interested so far and it looks okay gramatically and such.
~Kdh.