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5/31/2008 c3 3Kotuso
This was another good chapter filled with descriptions aplenty. I only wish that it was a tad bit longer.
5/29/2008 c2 Kotuso
This is looking very good so far. It seems very thought out and it seems to of been executed in a logical fashion, unlike my stories, which are made up on the go and vary wildly in pace.
5/28/2008 c3 6The Crazy Talk Kid
An interesting couple of chapters. These zones are rather intriguing, a force that mutates animals and turns plants into geometrical shapes. Its rather intriguing. No problems I notice but the soldiers seem a little quiet, there's got to be one loudmouth in the group.

Kdh.
5/25/2008 c1 3Kent Edwins
For some reason, this reminds me of starcraft meets hamlet. Tight prose. You throw the reader right into the action, which works great for a prologue. Is this going to be its own story, a one-shot thing, perhaps dropping a hint for tabernacle, or is it simply a daily writing exercise?
5/25/2008 c1 6The Crazy Talk Kid
Nothing like a bolt to the head to start off a story. I'm interested so far and it looks okay gramatically and such.

~Kdh.
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