
5/21/2015 c2 Ariadneowl
I like it, but you used lightly, like, ten times. If you switched up your adjectives, this could be great.
I like it, but you used lightly, like, ten times. If you switched up your adjectives, this could be great.
4/2/2015 c1 Guest
I simply can't finish this because the overabundance of description. You know how people say a little goes a long way and less is more. Well, that's very much true in my opinion.
I simply can't finish this because the overabundance of description. You know how people say a little goes a long way and less is more. Well, that's very much true in my opinion.
12/22/2014 c42 Animea
I have to say that I really enjoyed the whole story. It was very, very good. I stayed the whole night on to read it :). I am heterosexual but I do have homosexual friends and I am very happy the world is opening up to them. The freedom to love should be for everyone regardless of gender or sexuality. I'm also glad it was a happy ending story :). I hate that most of the gay stories in books or movies end up to be sad ones with lingering feelings and hopeless dreams. Thank you again for the story and I hope you will continue to write :)
I have to say that I really enjoyed the whole story. It was very, very good. I stayed the whole night on to read it :). I am heterosexual but I do have homosexual friends and I am very happy the world is opening up to them. The freedom to love should be for everyone regardless of gender or sexuality. I'm also glad it was a happy ending story :). I hate that most of the gay stories in books or movies end up to be sad ones with lingering feelings and hopeless dreams. Thank you again for the story and I hope you will continue to write :)
9/5/2014 c34 zeljko
I'am reading and loving the story... Characters are addoralbe... I just hope for the happy ending... I'll be so sad if you messed up the ending...
I'am reading and loving the story... Characters are addoralbe... I just hope for the happy ending... I'll be so sad if you messed up the ending...