for Casey and Adrian7/28/2009 c4 
24fairies and snapple
This is really good, too. It's so real how desperate Adrian is for his dad's love and approval, even though his dad doesn't seem to give a shit. I also liked Casey's declaration in the middle, there. Please update soon!
24fairies and snappleThis is really good, too. It's so real how desperate Adrian is for his dad's love and approval, even though his dad doesn't seem to give a shit. I also liked Casey's declaration in the middle, there. Please update soon!
7/13/2009 c4 love to read
Hi, I am loving this story very much, I hope you can update soon...
Hi, I am loving this story very much, I hope you can update soon...
7/1/2009 c4 MAGICAL.NARRATOR
casey's such a bad boy and if he wasn't such a man-whore i could really really like him.lol.
i like Adrian so far though.
great story =]
casey's such a bad boy and if he wasn't such a man-whore i could really really like him.lol.
i like Adrian so far though.
great story =]
6/25/2009 c4 12TheAirIbreathe
Seems good so far kind of slow but I'm sure it'll pick up. The writing here would be better than in Someday Soon, but it seems like you don't really describe the settings in terms of the five senses or character appearances. So while it's really good, the scenes are kind of vague to me. :)
12TheAirIbreatheSeems good so far kind of slow but I'm sure it'll pick up. The writing here would be better than in Someday Soon, but it seems like you don't really describe the settings in terms of the five senses or character appearances. So while it's really good, the scenes are kind of vague to me. :)
6/24/2009 c4 7Sunshine Bear
I don't know if I have ever read this before...
I like it though.
Love it.
Wannaeatit...
I'm creepy.
7Sunshine BearI don't know if I have ever read this before...
I like it though.
Love it.
Wannaeatit...
I'm creepy.
6/24/2009 c4 3Max-Ashworth
Aww, I remember this story. :)
It's terrible. I love and hate Casey. I mean, he seems like he'd be kinda cool to hang out with, but he's kind of a douchebag. Y'know. When it comes to love. I mean, c'mon. You can't screw with a kid named Aubrey.
He's got it bad enough.
lol jk, I love the name Aubrey. xD Off topic: I knew a girl named Aubrey. SUCH a bitch! She was pretty gross. Anyway.
You give me hope that I'll update again someday lol. Haven't since February because of various reasons...but mainly writers' block. .
3Max-AshworthAww, I remember this story. :)
It's terrible. I love and hate Casey. I mean, he seems like he'd be kinda cool to hang out with, but he's kind of a douchebag. Y'know. When it comes to love. I mean, c'mon. You can't screw with a kid named Aubrey.
He's got it bad enough.
lol jk, I love the name Aubrey. xD Off topic: I knew a girl named Aubrey. SUCH a bitch! She was pretty gross. Anyway.
You give me hope that I'll update again someday lol. Haven't since February because of various reasons...but mainly writers' block. .
6/24/2009 c4 momo
I got so excited to see an update! I forgot about what was happening and had to reread the whole thing again - but it was all worth it. :D
I really like this chapter. Adrian seems to be loosing up some towards Casey; and Casey is starting to grow on me some. Even though I kind of want to shove him down the stairs for poor Adrian. lol And I can't wait to know why Casey is so stiff from hearing about his boarding school, and why he doesn't believe in love.
Maybe Adrian can turn his mind around and slap him silly. 8D
Maria is a sweetheart, and I'm curious to the sudden note from Adrian's dad. I guess this is where patience takes place again.
Much luck with the update! Can't wait to read more!
I got so excited to see an update! I forgot about what was happening and had to reread the whole thing again - but it was all worth it. :D
I really like this chapter. Adrian seems to be loosing up some towards Casey; and Casey is starting to grow on me some. Even though I kind of want to shove him down the stairs for poor Adrian. lol And I can't wait to know why Casey is so stiff from hearing about his boarding school, and why he doesn't believe in love.
Maybe Adrian can turn his mind around and slap him silly. 8D
Maria is a sweetheart, and I'm curious to the sudden note from Adrian's dad. I guess this is where patience takes place again.
Much luck with the update! Can't wait to read more!
6/24/2009 c4 Hettiezstar
This is very good!
I just read it all :)
I really do feel sorry for Adrian, and my heart was wrenching when he was left on his LAZZAH on the beach ;(
Pleasse update soon!
This is very good!
I just read it all :)
I really do feel sorry for Adrian, and my heart was wrenching when he was left on his LAZZAH on the beach ;(
Pleasse update soon!
6/24/2009 c4 mad-one123
jesus christ on a cross! i was so happy to see you had updated! iv'e checked your page so much over the years thank you for updating! i love your writing and your stories. i really like adrian, hes the kind of character i always fall for. and i cant wait to see the development of his and casey's relationship. please please dont dissapear for too long before the next update! i also cant wait for someday soon to be updated! your stories are gold! :)
jesus christ on a cross! i was so happy to see you had updated! iv'e checked your page so much over the years thank you for updating! i love your writing and your stories. i really like adrian, hes the kind of character i always fall for. and i cant wait to see the development of his and casey's relationship. please please dont dissapear for too long before the next update! i also cant wait for someday soon to be updated! your stories are gold! :)
11/28/2008 c3 Jester08
Interesting story so far! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
Interesting story so far! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^