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5/26/2008 c1 115Random-Idiocity
Some interesting imagery here, but non the less is very good. Keep it Up!
5/26/2008 c1 142FELICIA-SPENCER
This is really good. It's been awhile since I've been on this site, and I really liked your poem...especially the part that says

Leave the knife in

It feels better there

Its cold embrace is

Much warmer

Very profound statement. Any way I love it, and hopefully there will be more to come. So no more Myspace 4 you...this is what you need to be doing. Great job.
5/26/2008 c1 i-want-2-delete-my-account
i like the repetition of 'no..' i also like the reference to the cold embrace of the knife.

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