for NO!5/26/2008 c1 
115Random-Idiocity
Some interesting imagery here, but non the less is very good. Keep it Up!
115Random-IdiocitySome interesting imagery here, but non the less is very good. Keep it Up!
5/26/2008 c1 142FELICIA-SPENCER
This is really good. It's been awhile since I've been on this site, and I really liked your poem...especially the part that says
Leave the knife in
It feels better there
Its cold embrace is
Much warmer
Very profound statement. Any way I love it, and hopefully there will be more to come. So no more Myspace 4 you...this is what you need to be doing. Great job.
142FELICIA-SPENCERThis is really good. It's been awhile since I've been on this site, and I really liked your poem...especially the part that says
Leave the knife in
It feels better there
Its cold embrace is
Much warmer
Very profound statement. Any way I love it, and hopefully there will be more to come. So no more Myspace 4 you...this is what you need to be doing. Great job.
5/26/2008 c1 i-want-2-delete-my-account
i like the repetition of 'no..' i also like the reference to the cold embrace of the knife.
i like the repetition of 'no..' i also like the reference to the cold embrace of the knife.