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11/2/2013 c1 1APassionForReadingAndWriting
Very sweet! :D I love it :D
9/30/2013 c1 9Moon Prynces
Oh my god, that was adorable.

Alright, I know I've been reviewing a bunch of your things lately and fav'ing stuff too, but I just can't stop myself. And you need to know how much I appreciate your work! I mean, so many other people do too but they just haven't all reviewed with their own thoughts.

Olive's character was so original and genuine and cute and I swear, I wish I was her! She had these quirky little phrases that fit in with her character so perfectly and I could understand Sheridan – or any character – being interested in her. I loved her playing with the shakers in the beginning, especially when you inserted subtle things such as her hands reaching back for them after a pause in their conversation or when she blushed at him pointing it out but still confidently going, "Pfftt, yeah!" like she didn't even mind being embarrassed.

And Sheridan was so endearing. Especially his fixation with staring at her lips, and then her eyes and then being proud of himself for being able to do those two things while still paying attention to whatever she was saying. I loved how gradual the buildup to his feelings came. Like, he sounded so sure he wasn't lusting after her lips or anything but then just gave in like, it is what it is. Definitely cute how he says his cousin must be gay to not be as distracted by her lips as he is.

Anyway, their kisses were hot and wonderful and so great to read. I love at the end where his explanation starts off so simply and sincerely with, "I just wanted to be your friend." Everything just felt so real and genuine and something I would love to experience myself.

You write so well. I love it – and I'm sorry it might seem that word has lost all meaning with the many times you've heard it from me in such a short amount of time. But it's also late and I'm tired and I've been sick the past 48 hours so my brain isn't as up to speed.

Sigh, another story I absolutely must favorite so I can reread it again in the future! Thank you!

11/17/2012 c1 heal me forever
11/2/2012 c1 Poisonmind
Aww! So much fluff! Love it!
1/28/2012 c1 1NeonTime
I don't care about the authors note, but otherwise was just excellent.
1/21/2012 c1 sunshinecmnl
loved it!
9/22/2011 c1 13youngin-matomon

I love Sheridan.

Isn't that girl's name?

Whatever. I love 'im.
9/26/2009 c1 catd94
That was so cute! I especially enjoyed the ending with Olive stepping in the gum. It just made me laugh. Thanks for this
7/3/2009 c1 Jubileyn
Can I just say I am SO glad that I found this? This has to be one of the best one-shots I've ever read, and it's even from the perspective of a guy (I usually only read stories from a girl's POV, because hey, I am one). Olive makes me laugh and I love her jokes ("I don't appreciate your cheek!" xD) and her personality and I love Sheridan's valiant struggle against those compelling lips of hers. This is just made of awesome-sauce! :D
6/30/2009 c1 Frozen.by.Sloth
Aw. I love how it begins and ends with the gum. And the point it makes. And the "okay then" and her lips and his cheek. His cheek and her sense of humour especially. maybe his cheek a bit more. 'Cause I APPRECIATE it! buahhaha..

It's spastic. Fantastic... You know, once you start writing those words that end at "tic" you just can't stop it!

Either way. Adorable!


6/27/2009 c1 18Jade Q. Dean
Loved it ^^
3/14/2009 c1 Kjersti
Incredibly cute story. I loved it. :)
2/27/2009 c1 13blurrylights
Hilarious...Sheridan is kind of dense, but in a good way. :)
2/17/2009 c1 SparklingStar25
adorable one shot!

n its just too funny!lol
12/19/2008 c1 25Kyllex
Aww. I can't believe I hadn't read this yet!

It's adorable!

I freaking love Olive. She is so funny!

Even if her jokes are pretty corny.

That's what makes her so COOL! Haha.

Kudos to you for yet another amazing work of awesomeness. :)

Your buddy,

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