for Note To Self: Learn Social Skills7/27/2014 c23 
1FireIceandPoison
wait a minute wait a minute what did he just do to her?
I'm kinda hoping it's not what I think it is ;)
1FireIceandPoisonwait a minute wait a minute what did he just do to her?
I'm kinda hoping it's not what I think it is ;)
7/26/2014 c19 FireIceandPoison
Hal totally wants her. He wants to kiss her and make love to her and dang this is awesome. Hal may be a prick at times but he is hilarious and they're good together.
Hal totally wants her. He wants to kiss her and make love to her and dang this is awesome. Hal may be a prick at times but he is hilarious and they're good together.
7/26/2014 c8 FireIceandPoison
I'm not big on crying but if I were dating Hal and hanging with his family and friends...not only would I cry, I just might jump off of something really high...I feel so bad for Katie.
I'm not big on crying but if I were dating Hal and hanging with his family and friends...not only would I cry, I just might jump off of something really high...I feel so bad for Katie.
7/19/2014 c32 ajashire1
Brilliantly done I loved this story. It made me get fuzzy tingles in my stomach guts and my overly amused insomniac brain start laughing way to hard, thus making my brother open my door very slowly and ask if I've "finally gone of the deep end". To which I replied "I lost it long ago".
To say the least, you certainly made my night interesting. Thanks for the good read.
Brilliantly done I loved this story. It made me get fuzzy tingles in my stomach guts and my overly amused insomniac brain start laughing way to hard, thus making my brother open my door very slowly and ask if I've "finally gone of the deep end". To which I replied "I lost it long ago".
To say the least, you certainly made my night interesting. Thanks for the good read.
7/2/2014 c32 Lady Tyrell
I really really love this story! You're an amazing writer and basically this story is amazing. Is there any chance that you'll write a sequel for this? :(
I really really love this story! You're an amazing writer and basically this story is amazing. Is there any chance that you'll write a sequel for this? :(
5/28/2014 c31 jjosieknap
I'm sorry for only reviewing this last chapter, but I just wanted to pop in and tell you how much I enjoyed your story. I was sucked in from the beginning and could't put it down. You should really try to get it published...I'd probably reread it again :)
I'm sorry for only reviewing this last chapter, but I just wanted to pop in and tell you how much I enjoyed your story. I was sucked in from the beginning and could't put it down. You should really try to get it published...I'd probably reread it again :)
3/21/2014 c1 7CupCake34
I'm in love with your writing style. Seriously. The way you write is so interesting and funny! Amazing job :)
7CupCake34I'm in love with your writing style. Seriously. The way you write is so interesting and funny! Amazing job :)
2/4/2014 c31 PenguinLover33
I love it! There are some grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but it's good!
I love it! There are some grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but it's good!
1/23/2014 c31 3Colie Rae
I read your whole story and I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for writing it! I would say several chapters in the middle were repetitive as the same situation (kiss and run) kept happening with Hal and Katie but it did hammer home the state of the relationship. I also think she came to the realization of be yourself quite independently when the rest of the story, she required others to prod her along to conclusions. Of course I pick on two little complaints, which sounds like a downer, but I loved the story and thought it was well done and well planned out. Audrey was a great character and I loved hating her. She was the typical annoying school girl but had more bite and sass to her than many characters like her. I hated Jessica Cue so much as well, which was perfect. Grumpy Monroe was a favorite of mine. She drove me insane but I loved her presence in the story. You did give each character his/her own personality and memorable traits very well. I also loved the scene when Katie found out about Lily/James. I thought her reaction was very her and very authentic despite everyone else believing she was overreacting. I'm sure there were more bits and pieces but great job and thanks!
3Colie RaeI read your whole story and I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for writing it! I would say several chapters in the middle were repetitive as the same situation (kiss and run) kept happening with Hal and Katie but it did hammer home the state of the relationship. I also think she came to the realization of be yourself quite independently when the rest of the story, she required others to prod her along to conclusions. Of course I pick on two little complaints, which sounds like a downer, but I loved the story and thought it was well done and well planned out. Audrey was a great character and I loved hating her. She was the typical annoying school girl but had more bite and sass to her than many characters like her. I hated Jessica Cue so much as well, which was perfect. Grumpy Monroe was a favorite of mine. She drove me insane but I loved her presence in the story. You did give each character his/her own personality and memorable traits very well. I also loved the scene when Katie found out about Lily/James. I thought her reaction was very her and very authentic despite everyone else believing she was overreacting. I'm sure there were more bits and pieces but great job and thanks!