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6/21/2013 c28 Secrets
The little schlemiel! ( Katie is the schlemiel not HAL) How could she? First she agrees to have sex for all the wrong reasons, she should have sex if she loves him NOT to make him stay with her, and then she thinks he REJECTED he kind of did but not cuz of the so called 'challenge' but cuz of the reason she agreed to have sex with just to make him stay with her! Ugh! What that girl needs is a big big zetz!
6/20/2013 c13 Secrets
How do baggy clothes that make her look 12, look natural on her?
6/20/2013 c5 Secrets
OMG James and lily like each other! Now I skipped this chp (5) cuz the review box in the previous chp was not there so I'm writing the review for chp 4 ok?, this review is for CHAPTER 4 ONLY.
6/19/2013 c2 Secrets
Just being honest here and well, ur story's way too stiff let loose a little will'ya?
6/17/2013 c7 princecharprincesswit
it took me 7 chapters to start writing a review. while there is some unusual breaks in the writing (i dont remember which chapter but: K and H were playing football and he suddenly pulled her into the houd?), the story is charmingly written. the author has a distinctive voice, a conversational humor that rings clear. the descriptions and K's reaction's are spot-on hilarious! a very engaging story, and this early on, i feel that it is layered as well. great piece so far!
6/12/2013 c32 1XDXP
I love this story! Seriously- it's one of the best I've ever read.
6/3/2013 c3 Guest
Interesting. You have my interest.
6/3/2013 c2 NothingMoreThanLife123
I don't dislike Hal. I think the guy's funny.
5/8/2013 c31 16FairyTaleDreams
Hey - truly enjoyed the story. Loved Hal and Kate :) Especially liked all the bits in the middle. Wish there was more of an epilogue with them :D
4/23/2013 c1 5waterbluewings
I've read this story 4 times already in the past 2 years!
4/12/2013 c20 Amazing Fuzzy Llamas
Awww...they're so sweet! But I think Katie is just forcing herself to like James because (she thinks) she doesn't like Hal. But still, awesome story! Love it!
3/29/2013 c31 17Minkaos
Amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it. Kate and Hal are very cute together :)
3/29/2013 c31 Hop3lesS-Romantic-GirL
Loved loved loved this story:)))) great job! Sadits finished though :((
3/13/2013 c32 EmeraldLily
This was an extremely long read, but it was still amazing. I really enjoyed it, but I couldn't help but groan at their total obliviousness! Great job though. :)
3/13/2013 c2 ThisIsCool
I quite like Hal, actually... As her mum basically spelled out, he likes her. And tries to make her jealous by making out right in front of her.
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