for Stepbrothers9/9/2016 c19 Love it
I absolutely love this story and I hope you're still working on it. I love the characterization, I LOVE Saul, and Danny, knew kids like them growing up in one way or another, and it's a great story. Keep up the great work.
I absolutely love this story and I hope you're still working on it. I love the characterization, I LOVE Saul, and Danny, knew kids like them growing up in one way or another, and it's a great story. Keep up the great work.
12/29/2013 c19 UnfortunatelyA
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE? I LOVE THIS STORY MAN, YOU'VE LEFT US HANGING FOR SO LONG
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE? I LOVE THIS STORY MAN, YOU'VE LEFT US HANGING FOR SO LONG
12/9/2013 c19 
16atenea-in-the-sky
Oh come on! Cant believe I started reading the only fic of yours that wasn't finished, apparently!
I wish you would update but I guess it's been long to hope for such a thing.. I was really loving the story, though. Saul and Danny were great.
16atenea-in-the-skyOh come on! Cant believe I started reading the only fic of yours that wasn't finished, apparently!
I wish you would update but I guess it's been long to hope for such a thing.. I was really loving the story, though. Saul and Danny were great.
10/21/2013 c19 1faroffdream
I am enthralled with this story! And even though it has been three years, I still have hope it will be finished.
1faroffdreamI am enthralled with this story! And even though it has been three years, I still have hope it will be finished.
10/8/2013 c19 Syta
So glad that you did not abandon this story. I like it. Will be waiting for updates ;)
So glad that you did not abandon this story. I like it. Will be waiting for updates ;)
9/14/2013 c8 Umsanalocality
Love the story so far, you are like the modern day DJ Salinger
Love the story so far, you are like the modern day DJ Salinger
5/31/2013 c19 Person Chick
its been 2 years! when are you going to update this story! please be very very very soon! i love it so far!
its been 2 years! when are you going to update this story! please be very very very soon! i love it so far!
5/8/2013 c10 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
I really really love how intimately you write your characters- how naked and full of faults they are. It's beautiful. And you've handled the abuse aspect of this well- how Saul can't see the links to his behaviour. I know you haven't finished this but I decided to read it anyway, and even if you don't what you've written is somehow enough.
Kudos
Suki
I really really love how intimately you write your characters- how naked and full of faults they are. It's beautiful. And you've handled the abuse aspect of this well- how Saul can't see the links to his behaviour. I know you haven't finished this but I decided to read it anyway, and even if you don't what you've written is somehow enough.
Kudos
Suki
1/23/2013 c19 3Nicholas Scott
I don't know when or if you'll see this as its been quite some time since you've written on this, but I have to tell you that this is one of the best stories that I've read on fictionpress ever. It is absolutely beautiful and emotional and physical and erotic and sensual and filled with so much wonderful writing. Saul and Danny are just exquisite characters. I love them both so much. you have such wonderful flow and pacing and I can't even begin to tell you how wonderful it is. I had to stop reading like 6 chapters back so that I wouldn't finish it too soon. I do that with all my favorite books. That is how good it is. I don't know if you have plans to continue this or not, but it is so very very very good. Beautifully written!
3Nicholas ScottI don't know when or if you'll see this as its been quite some time since you've written on this, but I have to tell you that this is one of the best stories that I've read on fictionpress ever. It is absolutely beautiful and emotional and physical and erotic and sensual and filled with so much wonderful writing. Saul and Danny are just exquisite characters. I love them both so much. you have such wonderful flow and pacing and I can't even begin to tell you how wonderful it is. I had to stop reading like 6 chapters back so that I wouldn't finish it too soon. I do that with all my favorite books. That is how good it is. I don't know if you have plans to continue this or not, but it is so very very very good. Beautifully written!
1/17/2013 c19 Guest
Please update soon. I am so into this story and I am emotionally invested in these characters. Please update...when you can...hopefully soon :)
Please update soon. I am so into this story and I am emotionally invested in these characters. Please update...when you can...hopefully soon :)
12/25/2012 c19 Guest
i really liked this story!
i really liked this story!
8/12/2012 c19 Wicked witch Ayumi
Are you going to update this ever again? D:
I read all 19 chapters in two days.. Mind you, nights. I really like the style of your writing. Simple and easy to apprehend unlike some authors who use too many literary devices.
Anyway, keep this up! I hope you'll update soon!
Are you going to update this ever again? D:
I read all 19 chapters in two days.. Mind you, nights. I really like the style of your writing. Simple and easy to apprehend unlike some authors who use too many literary devices.
Anyway, keep this up! I hope you'll update soon!
7/1/2012 c19 sneaky-fox
please come back! Usually I prefer "happy go lucky" romance stories but I must admit that I love this story. I'm definitely a huge fan of Danny he seems to be the only hope for Saul getting back on track. They both deserve the happiness they could/have found together :)
I hope you are going to finish this story, Saul deserves it ;)
please come back! Usually I prefer "happy go lucky" romance stories but I must admit that I love this story. I'm definitely a huge fan of Danny he seems to be the only hope for Saul getting back on track. They both deserve the happiness they could/have found together :)
I hope you are going to finish this story, Saul deserves it ;)