for Stepbrothers12/11/2008 c15 narcissistic
yeah it got upgraded arounf here...it confused me at first but i got used to it...it's okay though
on another note..
OMG AN UPDATE! LOVE IT! I feel bad for Danny though. He's gonna be left all alone...
Saul wants so much but he doesnt really put any effort into anything he wants...
yeah it got upgraded arounf here...it confused me at first but i got used to it...it's okay though
on another note..
OMG AN UPDATE! LOVE IT! I feel bad for Danny though. He's gonna be left all alone...
Saul wants so much but he doesnt really put any effort into anything he wants...
12/11/2008 c15 darkshadowarchfiend
I love this story and the emotion in the story and the development of the relationship between Danny and Saul. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love this story and the emotion in the story and the development of the relationship between Danny and Saul. I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/11/2008 c15 
6Drips of Blue-Green Turpentine
The weird ass arrangement of items on the top now just happened last night, It was normal when I went to bed, then I woke up and it was like that...Fictionpress is going prolly be updated the shit out of like Gaia Online...
BTW, I like Saul and ...Danny (For a second I forgot his name) They are cool. I been reading your stuff [On my other account] for awhile and I actually have your screen name memorized. You should get some of this shit publish
(Despite me reading it, I think this is my first review, but I prolly favorited one of two here and there)
Drips OF Blue-Green Turpentine
(Stalking the world, one author at a time)
6Drips of Blue-Green TurpentineThe weird ass arrangement of items on the top now just happened last night, It was normal when I went to bed, then I woke up and it was like that...Fictionpress is going prolly be updated the shit out of like Gaia Online...
BTW, I like Saul and ...Danny (For a second I forgot his name) They are cool. I been reading your stuff [On my other account] for awhile and I actually have your screen name memorized. You should get some of this shit publish
(Despite me reading it, I think this is my first review, but I prolly favorited one of two here and there)
Drips OF Blue-Green Turpentine
(Stalking the world, one author at a time)
12/11/2008 c15 3nonaccount
Yeah, I agree about the FP changes, I mean. I just clicked on the snazzy new Review button it adds some shiney newness to the review experience. Anyway, I'm glad you updated 'cause I missed these two. "And his voice felt much the same as his arm," I don't really know what that means, but I like it. :)
Enjoy your new glasses.
3nonaccountYeah, I agree about the FP changes, I mean. I just clicked on the snazzy new Review button it adds some shiney newness to the review experience. Anyway, I'm glad you updated 'cause I missed these two. "And his voice felt much the same as his arm," I don't really know what that means, but I like it. :)
Enjoy your new glasses.
12/11/2008 c15 2Mademoiselle Rouge
I think it's great how your story is so cute but not mushy at all. Saul's great, too.
2Mademoiselle RougeI think it's great how your story is so cute but not mushy at all. Saul's great, too.
12/10/2008 c15 1Bedlam Chaos
Changes... Yeah ! I keep adding stories to favorites even if they are already it because I keep forgetting that the "review" button is no where where it previously was. I'm glad you're back... I like this story really much and it's more interesting than the sociology lecture I have now (even if it's the last one of the term and, hopefully, my life).
I liked this chapter because of its casualness: nothing important is happenning but that's how real life is: small changes which make the difference. I like it but I'm a bit sad 'cause if you keep posting after sunday, I won't be able to read it before mid-january because of those f* examinations.
Danny's great. I like him ^^ I like sulking people ;-)
Thanks for the story.
1Bedlam ChaosChanges... Yeah ! I keep adding stories to favorites even if they are already it because I keep forgetting that the "review" button is no where where it previously was. I'm glad you're back... I like this story really much and it's more interesting than the sociology lecture I have now (even if it's the last one of the term and, hopefully, my life).
I liked this chapter because of its casualness: nothing important is happenning but that's how real life is: small changes which make the difference. I like it but I'm a bit sad 'cause if you keep posting after sunday, I won't be able to read it before mid-january because of those f* examinations.
Danny's great. I like him ^^ I like sulking people ;-)
Thanks for the story.
12/10/2008 c15 Le1chi
Aww..Danny thought Saul was gonna leave him..They're SO cute together. Anyways, school is always trouble -_-; I wonder what's gonna happen next..Thanks for updating!
Aww..Danny thought Saul was gonna leave him..They're SO cute together. Anyways, school is always trouble -_-; I wonder what's gonna happen next..Thanks for updating!
12/10/2008 c15 4Amindaya
Isn't the stats tracker thing way cool? I have readers from the most random places, like Mongolia and Pakistan. It's so awesome.
I like the scene of Pete and Casey. It was really well done, very visual.
4AmindayaIsn't the stats tracker thing way cool? I have readers from the most random places, like Mongolia and Pakistan. It's so awesome.
I like the scene of Pete and Casey. It was really well done, very visual.
11/26/2008 c14 4SerialXLain
“He typically smokes bones.” I literally laughed out loud...
Hrm. Danny surprised me with the acid. He was all cute and innocent at that part till then. But I loved how Saul took care of him. It made him seem almost...sweet.
Nice chapter. :)
4SerialXLain“He typically smokes bones.” I literally laughed out loud...
Hrm. Danny surprised me with the acid. He was all cute and innocent at that part till then. But I loved how Saul took care of him. It made him seem almost...sweet.
Nice chapter. :)
11/25/2008 c13 SerialXLain
Aw. Casey was cute. :3
"to wash up and go back on the clock." So thought that said "cock."
Hurray blowjobs...!
My reviews suck, man.
Aw. Casey was cute. :3
"to wash up and go back on the clock." So thought that said "cock."
Hurray blowjobs...!
My reviews suck, man.
11/25/2008 c12 SerialXLain
“My pecker, nimrod.” I loled.
I also loled somewhere else, but I forgot where it was.
Danny is too cute sometimes with his little hurt feelings and love...
“My pecker, nimrod.” I loled.
I also loled somewhere else, but I forgot where it was.
Danny is too cute sometimes with his little hurt feelings and love...
11/25/2008 c11 SerialXLain
Took me forever to read this.
D'aw. How sweet and sad. D: I'm glad that it's out in the open though.
Like the "Danny hurts me, but I don’t think I want that to go away." line.
Took me forever to read this.
D'aw. How sweet and sad. D: I'm glad that it's out in the open though.
Like the "Danny hurts me, but I don’t think I want that to go away." line.
11/12/2008 c14 Sinthe
This is quite possibly one of the best fucking things ever. I love this mix of bitter and sweet, and everything is so down to earth and dirty. The soft, gentle undertones in their relationship is pure bliss. I want more, fucker.
This is quite possibly one of the best fucking things ever. I love this mix of bitter and sweet, and everything is so down to earth and dirty. The soft, gentle undertones in their relationship is pure bliss. I want more, fucker.