for Stepbrothers9/9/2008 c13 
2mia5081
I like Casey. He seems nice. The end. I'm off to class now lol
Update soon!
~Mia
2mia5081I like Casey. He seems nice. The end. I'm off to class now lol
Update soon!
~Mia
9/2/2008 c13 2Naomi Schemer
Yay, more characters getting developed. I'm liking the whole Casey/Pete thing, it's cute...'specially the "Peter" thing, which has a few implications.
2Naomi SchemerYay, more characters getting developed. I'm liking the whole Casey/Pete thing, it's cute...'specially the "Peter" thing, which has a few implications.
9/2/2008 c13 8Sugar Coated Lemons
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Nice.
Wan't fantastic though. not a s good s the other chapters, but i suspect it was an attempt to move the plot aog.
it seemed a little slow, though.
Construtive crit, as always, dear.
8Sugar Coated Lemonsm
Nice.
Wan't fantastic though. not a s good s the other chapters, but i suspect it was an attempt to move the plot aog.
it seemed a little slow, though.
Construtive crit, as always, dear.
9/2/2008 c13 6unheardmelodies
i love how their relationship is turning warm. they've accepted the attraction, and now there's this connection between them, and it seems they're really good for each other. i like your writing style, and that you don't leave out the physical, naturalistic details some writers like to ignore because they think the piece reads more smoothly without them. i think because you keep them, it's actually more real & believable. anyways... awaiting another update. that's another thing - i really appreciate you updating regularly. i get a feeling that you really care:))
6unheardmelodiesi love how their relationship is turning warm. they've accepted the attraction, and now there's this connection between them, and it seems they're really good for each other. i like your writing style, and that you don't leave out the physical, naturalistic details some writers like to ignore because they think the piece reads more smoothly without them. i think because you keep them, it's actually more real & believable. anyways... awaiting another update. that's another thing - i really appreciate you updating regularly. i get a feeling that you really care:))
9/2/2008 c13 knits alot
Saul did his good deed, way to go Saul. And I'm liking the relationship between Danny and Saul. Danny is good for Saul.
I don't understand why parents are like that with their kids. At least make an effort to talk to him everyday.
Saul did his good deed, way to go Saul. And I'm liking the relationship between Danny and Saul. Danny is good for Saul.
I don't understand why parents are like that with their kids. At least make an effort to talk to him everyday.
9/2/2008 c13 1PhaithMcCoy
Dude. Kinky. And oh-so-heartfelt. Lolz.
Especially endearing, that last little bit. Love how he's helping Pete out. :)
Write faster, yah?
1PhaithMcCoyDude. Kinky. And oh-so-heartfelt. Lolz.
Especially endearing, that last little bit. Love how he's helping Pete out. :)
Write faster, yah?
9/1/2008 c13 WitchGhost
Good chapter, though I don't it's a good idea for me to read this while watching something scary.
It does kind of throw me for a loop when I read a graphic sex scene in an M rated story, though that's probably from me reading fanfiction on livejournal where people can use the NC-17 rating.
Good chapter, though I don't it's a good idea for me to read this while watching something scary.
It does kind of throw me for a loop when I read a graphic sex scene in an M rated story, though that's probably from me reading fanfiction on livejournal where people can use the NC-17 rating.