for Stepbrothers8/27/2008 c12 
2Naomi Schemer
You write sweet characters surprisingly well, considering that the majority of your characters, at least lately, are more of the forward, gruff types. Danny has, slowly but surely, wormed his way into my heart.
2Naomi SchemerYou write sweet characters surprisingly well, considering that the majority of your characters, at least lately, are more of the forward, gruff types. Danny has, slowly but surely, wormed his way into my heart.
8/27/2008 c12 1Initially loaded
I think the reason i like this so much, is that the emotions and reactions in this story are believable. Or maybe it's the way you write...
1Initially loadedI think the reason i like this so much, is that the emotions and reactions in this story are believable. Or maybe it's the way you write...
8/27/2008 c12 knits alot
Saul never said the "L" word. He has issues that I hope Danny gives him time to figure out. And I hope Saul doesn't mess everything up because he is messed up.
I don't mind if you can't respond to reviews. The story is more than enough from you. :)
Saul never said the "L" word. He has issues that I hope Danny gives him time to figure out. And I hope Saul doesn't mess everything up because he is messed up.
I don't mind if you can't respond to reviews. The story is more than enough from you. :)
8/27/2008 c12 6unheardmelodies
yay, another update! i really like how you can make this story sweet without altering the characters. i mean they're teenage boys, so what if they're gay? they don't ecactly go around holding hands the whole time, no matter how much we'd want them to:) anyways... i'm a big fan of this piece, thanks for writing!
6unheardmelodiesyay, another update! i really like how you can make this story sweet without altering the characters. i mean they're teenage boys, so what if they're gay? they don't ecactly go around holding hands the whole time, no matter how much we'd want them to:) anyways... i'm a big fan of this piece, thanks for writing!
8/26/2008 c12 1Bedlam Chaos
I have a growing feeling that even if Danny is the most expressive in his feelings, if something happens and they aren't together anymore, Saul will be pretty down. And I don't want that to happen ^^
I'm feeling attached to those guys, they're just like... Real and that's awesome. Thanks
1Bedlam ChaosI have a growing feeling that even if Danny is the most expressive in his feelings, if something happens and they aren't together anymore, Saul will be pretty down. And I don't want that to happen ^^
I'm feeling attached to those guys, they're just like... Real and that's awesome. Thanks
8/26/2008 c12 2slasherbynight6
Okay, that was probably the best chapter yet..
nice length! great dialogue! and i love the scene at the end.. just them lyin in bed... that was freakin amazing, and so cute at the same time... you do a fantastic job at hinting that Saul loves him back without him actually saying he loves danny... if that makes any sense.. it totally fits the character..
i loved the line when saul refers to danny as "my stepbrother/friend/lover".. i'm not really sure why, i just thought it was good.. :)
and so danny finally hangs out with benji.. nice nice... saul and danny just keep getting better and better as a couple.. you do a fantastic job about building the chemistry between them.. and, perhaps i sense saul getting more serious about life with getting a job and whatnot? the story is continually developing quite nicely..
once again, you are a fantastic, amazing writer and i love this story. Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
2slasherbynight6Okay, that was probably the best chapter yet..
nice length! great dialogue! and i love the scene at the end.. just them lyin in bed... that was freakin amazing, and so cute at the same time... you do a fantastic job at hinting that Saul loves him back without him actually saying he loves danny... if that makes any sense.. it totally fits the character..
i loved the line when saul refers to danny as "my stepbrother/friend/lover".. i'm not really sure why, i just thought it was good.. :)
and so danny finally hangs out with benji.. nice nice... saul and danny just keep getting better and better as a couple.. you do a fantastic job about building the chemistry between them.. and, perhaps i sense saul getting more serious about life with getting a job and whatnot? the story is continually developing quite nicely..
once again, you are a fantastic, amazing writer and i love this story. Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
8/26/2008 c12 21Faith Adeline
Aw, that was cute. The end. I love Danny. He's definitely not like, this big brute I envisioned in the beginning of the story. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
21Faith AdelineAw, that was cute. The end. I love Danny. He's definitely not like, this big brute I envisioned in the beginning of the story. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
8/26/2008 c12 1PhaithMcCoy
That there was a confession of LURVE! Holy crow. Aw fuckin' cute, and Saul's reply owned life, as well.
You should hurry and reply to the other reviews, sweetie, seriously. :)
1PhaithMcCoyThat there was a confession of LURVE! Holy crow. Aw fuckin' cute, and Saul's reply owned life, as well.
You should hurry and reply to the other reviews, sweetie, seriously. :)
8/26/2008 c12 WitchGhost
Another good chapter, though I end up skipping a chapter almost all the time because I sporadically get emailed updates. I liked the part where they went to see a movie together, though unlike Saul it seems, I kind of enjoy watching bad movies.
The last scene was also nice. I can relate to being called down for dinner multiple times.
Another good chapter, though I end up skipping a chapter almost all the time because I sporadically get emailed updates. I liked the part where they went to see a movie together, though unlike Saul it seems, I kind of enjoy watching bad movies.
The last scene was also nice. I can relate to being called down for dinner multiple times.
8/24/2008 c11 8Sugar Coated Lemons
Sorry, but that was really cute until i smashed my findger in the drawer.
made me teary.
8Sugar Coated LemonsSorry, but that was really cute until i smashed my findger in the drawer.
made me teary.
8/23/2008 c11 6unheardmelodies
got back from another holiday, and saw two e-mails with updates:) made me really happy. although, this story is making me feel really bad for saul. poor guy... still, it's sweet, the way things are now between him and danny. i can see emotional connection building, and i definitely like it. i also like the way you keep both of them in character, and not turning things overly sappy just because the two of them are getting together. cause they are, right? RIGHT?:) awaiting another update!
6unheardmelodiesgot back from another holiday, and saw two e-mails with updates:) made me really happy. although, this story is making me feel really bad for saul. poor guy... still, it's sweet, the way things are now between him and danny. i can see emotional connection building, and i definitely like it. i also like the way you keep both of them in character, and not turning things overly sappy just because the two of them are getting together. cause they are, right? RIGHT?:) awaiting another update!