for Stepbrothers8/17/2008 c10 
2Naomi Schemer
Heh, I loved the Full Monty. Also, this chapter is ridiculously sweet. Definitely an "aw" chapter.
2Naomi SchemerHeh, I loved the Full Monty. Also, this chapter is ridiculously sweet. Definitely an "aw" chapter.
8/15/2008 c10 magalina
Aah, happy late birthday! . And I agree with the The Full Monty comment.
I feel bad for Danny, Saul can be a jerk -.- But I feel bad for him too... Anyway~ love this :)
Aah, happy late birthday! . And I agree with the The Full Monty comment.
I feel bad for Danny, Saul can be a jerk -.- But I feel bad for him too... Anyway~ love this :)
8/14/2008 c10 nonaccount
Nice to read some moments of tenderness between them. The story is really coming together and fleshing out for me now. That's probably not very clear, I just mean that I have more of an idea of this story's trajectory ... or something 'cause that's still not it. Oh well, I'm tired and not making sense.
Happy Belated Birthday!
Nice to read some moments of tenderness between them. The story is really coming together and fleshing out for me now. That's probably not very clear, I just mean that I have more of an idea of this story's trajectory ... or something 'cause that's still not it. Oh well, I'm tired and not making sense.
Happy Belated Birthday!
8/14/2008 c10 WTF OMG STFU
aaw
cute.
Saul and Danny are sweet together
at least when Sauls hungover! ahaha
Post more soon I
aaw
cute.
Saul and Danny are sweet together
at least when Sauls hungover! ahaha
Post more soon I
8/14/2008 c10 1Bedlam Chaos
Back in Belgium but I still love love love ^^" this story. The way Danny and Saul interact with each other is fantastic. I'm trying to imagine them in ten years. They are cool :)
1Bedlam ChaosBack in Belgium but I still love love love ^^" this story. The way Danny and Saul interact with each other is fantastic. I'm trying to imagine them in ten years. They are cool :)
8/14/2008 c10 Le1chi
God, Im glad I read this..Even though its so early in the morning. Danny amuses me. I like how he seems to tough and becomes so soft a while later. And Saul...Well Saul's just really fucked up. I like it.
God, Im glad I read this..Even though its so early in the morning. Danny amuses me. I like how he seems to tough and becomes so soft a while later. And Saul...Well Saul's just really fucked up. I like it.
8/13/2008 c10 4Amindaya
Oh man! I totally forgot about this! Totally! I don't even HAVE an excuse! I'm so sorry!
4AmindayaOh man! I totally forgot about this! Totally! I don't even HAVE an excuse! I'm so sorry!
8/13/2008 c10 WitchGhost
Poor Saul and his bad hangover, but that's what you get. Nice chapter by the way, not much else to say really. Well besides that I'm probably the only person kind of amused by the last line.
Poor Saul and his bad hangover, but that's what you get. Nice chapter by the way, not much else to say really. Well besides that I'm probably the only person kind of amused by the last line.
8/13/2008 c10 2mia5081
I love how Danny shaved Saul-it showed how Saul was willing to be vulnerable. :D
Update soon! (And Happy Birthday...and sorry for the shortness of the review...Michael Phelps has my attention on the TV lol)
~Mia
2mia5081I love how Danny shaved Saul-it showed how Saul was willing to be vulnerable. :D
Update soon! (And Happy Birthday...and sorry for the shortness of the review...Michael Phelps has my attention on the TV lol)
~Mia
8/13/2008 c10 4SerialXLain
Aw, shit. I missed your birthday. I told myself that I was going to leave you a message or comment or something on myspace or whatever, and I forgot. Bad, Lainny. Bad. D: Happy late birthday.
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Ughh. I hate throwing up. Reading about Saul throwing up made me feel all gaggy.
But Danny shaving him is nice... I like that kind of stuff sometimes - the sweet, domestic kind of thing.
"that was the extent of female hair removal I cared to think about." Ahahaha.
4SerialXLainAw, shit. I missed your birthday. I told myself that I was going to leave you a message or comment or something on myspace or whatever, and I forgot. Bad, Lainny. Bad. D: Happy late birthday.
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Ughh. I hate throwing up. Reading about Saul throwing up made me feel all gaggy.
But Danny shaving him is nice... I like that kind of stuff sometimes - the sweet, domestic kind of thing.
"that was the extent of female hair removal I cared to think about." Ahahaha.