for Stepbrothers2/2/2010 c18 
3GreenVixen
i know u said not to give up on u but i just checked when the last time u update this fic and its been awhile so common update plz?
3GreenVixeni know u said not to give up on u but i just checked when the last time u update this fic and its been awhile so common update plz?
11/26/2009 c18 chickie
Three sittings and about 6 hours later I finish one of THEE greatest stories. You have to come back to this one. I have to Know what Saul is going to do and how things will go with Danny. Please! I have to know =( Very great fic, hope to read more within this year :)
Three sittings and about 6 hours later I finish one of THEE greatest stories. You have to come back to this one. I have to Know what Saul is going to do and how things will go with Danny. Please! I have to know =( Very great fic, hope to read more within this year :)
11/15/2009 c18 1Auphora
This story is amazing; I'm sure you've read that in a ton of other reviews, but that's because it's true. Your writing is really good and your characters have very realistic human characteristics; nevertheless, I plan to read more stories written by you if there are any.
Unlike a lot of the stories I read, this one really shows that it is in a guy's point of view. Saul's way of thinking and interacting isn't feminine, and as a girl who doesn't really interact with guys all that much, this story was really interesting. My brother's way of thinking suddenly makes sense! (laughs at self)
Looking forward to the next chapter,
Wishing you the best,
-Auphora
1AuphoraThis story is amazing; I'm sure you've read that in a ton of other reviews, but that's because it's true. Your writing is really good and your characters have very realistic human characteristics; nevertheless, I plan to read more stories written by you if there are any.
Unlike a lot of the stories I read, this one really shows that it is in a guy's point of view. Saul's way of thinking and interacting isn't feminine, and as a girl who doesn't really interact with guys all that much, this story was really interesting. My brother's way of thinking suddenly makes sense! (laughs at self)
Looking forward to the next chapter,
Wishing you the best,
-Auphora
10/17/2009 c18 36Vulpine Ninja
Well, the sex part is hot, and Danny is sweet. But, overall most of the time the story is a lil mundane. No offense though. I've been waiting for a climax as I read (or some sort of cliffhanger), but then again the story has not ended yet.
Even so, I'm curious to know what will happen to those two. So please do update (although if my review seems a lil too late)
36Vulpine NinjaWell, the sex part is hot, and Danny is sweet. But, overall most of the time the story is a lil mundane. No offense though. I've been waiting for a climax as I read (or some sort of cliffhanger), but then again the story has not ended yet.
Even so, I'm curious to know what will happen to those two. So please do update (although if my review seems a lil too late)
10/6/2009 c18 kerryannh
Very good story. I love your use of dialogue. It makes the story very realistic. I hope that Saul does not leave Danny to go live with Greg. It sounds like bad things could happen involving alcohol and cheating. I can understand Saul's desire to get away from his mother and Andrew. I a hope Saul does not get abused again. It is so sad that his mother never paid enough attention to him to realize that he was being molested. So sad. Iam looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good writing.
Very good story. I love your use of dialogue. It makes the story very realistic. I hope that Saul does not leave Danny to go live with Greg. It sounds like bad things could happen involving alcohol and cheating. I can understand Saul's desire to get away from his mother and Andrew. I a hope Saul does not get abused again. It is so sad that his mother never paid enough attention to him to realize that he was being molested. So sad. Iam looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good writing.
8/13/2009 c18 2littlemischief
Great story. A real pleasure to read. See you at the next chapter!
Bonne continuation: )
2littlemischiefGreat story. A real pleasure to read. See you at the next chapter!
Bonne continuation: )
7/18/2009 c18 Rachizzle
Totally knew that was coming. I mean, I knew he was gonna end up staying with Greg, haha. Hmm. Why was Danny there? Looking for Saul? :O!
Great chapter, as usual.
Totally knew that was coming. I mean, I knew he was gonna end up staying with Greg, haha. Hmm. Why was Danny there? Looking for Saul? :O!
Great chapter, as usual.
7/3/2009 c18 2Naomi Schemer
Well, I'm glad I'm still here. Excellent chapter, and I wouldn't mind reading whatever Saul felt like Twitting.
2Naomi SchemerWell, I'm glad I'm still here. Excellent chapter, and I wouldn't mind reading whatever Saul felt like Twitting.
6/29/2009 c18 3Iconic
I am very glad for the update. I seriously love this story! Really, it's great. I am very interested to see how things progress from here; how will Saul and Danny make a relationship work, will living with Greg be to tempting for Saul...So many questions, but I guess I'm just going to have to wait for the answere until you update again. So please, sooner is better. You rock.
3IconicI am very glad for the update. I seriously love this story! Really, it's great. I am very interested to see how things progress from here; how will Saul and Danny make a relationship work, will living with Greg be to tempting for Saul...So many questions, but I guess I'm just going to have to wait for the answere until you update again. So please, sooner is better. You rock.