for Stepbrothers6/28/2009 c18 wonderland212
Please update more...that chapter had me really hoping for a Saul and Greg thing. lol I know , i know he has Danny but a girl can hope.lol
Please update more...that chapter had me really hoping for a Saul and Greg thing. lol I know , i know he has Danny but a girl can hope.lol
6/28/2009 c18 Puck Connolly
I really love this story :D
I read all of it in just a few hours xD
Can't wait to see more of this!
I really love this story :D
I read all of it in just a few hours xD
Can't wait to see more of this!
6/25/2009 c18 NyghtRayne
You are the bestest author ever! I swear it! It was wired i was thinking about this story and i looked to see if by the off chance you had updated and BAM! there it was a brand new chapter...seemingly all for me:D yeah yeah...delutional, but it was a great surprise to see it...please keep it up...i am slowly working my way through your archives and you really are good.
Rayne
You are the bestest author ever! I swear it! It was wired i was thinking about this story and i looked to see if by the off chance you had updated and BAM! there it was a brand new chapter...seemingly all for me:D yeah yeah...delutional, but it was a great surprise to see it...please keep it up...i am slowly working my way through your archives and you really are good.
Rayne
6/25/2009 c18 
3Max-Ashworth
Aww, they're so cute. I remember this story...lol. (I saw this because when I first saw it had updated I was like, "I LOVE THIS STORY! ...but now I gotta remembr who the characters are...and where we are in the story...uh-oh...") But it actually wasn't a problem. I thought it would be, but my memory is better than I thought. ;)
At least he will have a place to stay! :) And I'm sure you'll be able to cope, Danny.
You pussy. xD
3Max-AshworthAww, they're so cute. I remember this story...lol. (I saw this because when I first saw it had updated I was like, "I LOVE THIS STORY! ...but now I gotta remembr who the characters are...and where we are in the story...uh-oh...") But it actually wasn't a problem. I thought it would be, but my memory is better than I thought. ;)
At least he will have a place to stay! :) And I'm sure you'll be able to cope, Danny.
You pussy. xD
6/25/2009 c18 3nonaccount
I couldn't believe when I saw this in my email, I was so excited!
Saul is so nonchalant about everything it must drive Danny crazy.
I love that Saul doesn't get "normal" concepts like he's so confused how Danny would change him moving out when Benji asks if he's still leaving on/after his birthday. Aw, Saul he needs some lovin' sweetness from Danny and ... therapy lots of therapy, but he'd probably disappear into the ether before going.
3nonaccountI couldn't believe when I saw this in my email, I was so excited!
Saul is so nonchalant about everything it must drive Danny crazy.
I love that Saul doesn't get "normal" concepts like he's so confused how Danny would change him moving out when Benji asks if he's still leaving on/after his birthday. Aw, Saul he needs some lovin' sweetness from Danny and ... therapy lots of therapy, but he'd probably disappear into the ether before going.
6/25/2009 c18 1Bedlam Chaos
What can I say except I'm happy to see Saul's back. I wonder how he will be, he and his relationship with Danny. I liked yhe other stories you wrote this last month. The reason I didn't comment was that I barely had the time to save the page on my laptop before going back to my internetless study room (humpf). They were nice though.
Thanks for the update :-)
1Bedlam ChaosWhat can I say except I'm happy to see Saul's back. I wonder how he will be, he and his relationship with Danny. I liked yhe other stories you wrote this last month. The reason I didn't comment was that I barely had the time to save the page on my laptop before going back to my internetless study room (humpf). They were nice though.
Thanks for the update :-)
6/22/2009 c17 homepage
oh gosh danny is so adorable in such a weird way.:D Im really enjoying this story... uh update soon :P.
oh gosh danny is so adorable in such a weird way.:D Im really enjoying this story... uh update soon :P.
6/15/2009 c17 wonderland212
Great story...i really hope you finish it rather than leaving it unfinished like most people :(
U claimed your story was cliche but it really isnt which suprised me, so kudos to you...you'd be suprised how many ppl write unoriginal material.lol
Great story...i really hope you finish it rather than leaving it unfinished like most people :(
U claimed your story was cliche but it really isnt which suprised me, so kudos to you...you'd be suprised how many ppl write unoriginal material.lol
6/15/2009 c14 wonderland212
That was a really cute chapter! I love Saul when he is being the sweet boyfriend
That was a really cute chapter! I love Saul when he is being the sweet boyfriend
5/25/2009 c12 31Rebellious Marker
Good god, I'm hooked onto this story.
I will continue reading it, and I am so glad I found you.
This practically completes my life.
Thank you for writing.
31Rebellious MarkerGood god, I'm hooked onto this story.
I will continue reading it, and I am so glad I found you.
This practically completes my life.
Thank you for writing.
4/27/2009 c17 3Izzy the Impossible
a most fantastic display of author-ship, if i do say so...i just hope you plan on updating sometime soon. anywho, just thought i'd give you kudos for an awesome blend of a lot of things, mingled creatively together...it's pretty much not easy.
-Izzy
3Izzy the Impossiblea most fantastic display of author-ship, if i do say so...i just hope you plan on updating sometime soon. anywho, just thought i'd give you kudos for an awesome blend of a lot of things, mingled creatively together...it's pretty much not easy.
-Izzy
4/19/2009 c17 1stick and straw
I don't usually review stories that depress me, because I don't talk much when I'm depressed. Don't have anything to say. On the other hand, I hate it when people put stories on alert and then don't review, so here I am. Reviewing. Because I put this story on alert because I enjoyed it. Your characterization is good, and even though the plot seems to ramble a bit, it seems intentional, and it's not annoying or anything so it's all good :3 I like your characters and I like your descriptions. I like Peter. You don't really sugar coat anything you don't have to, and it's nice to find a story that does that. It's refreshing.
I'm going to go and watch a horror movie now and cheer myself up :)
1stick and strawI don't usually review stories that depress me, because I don't talk much when I'm depressed. Don't have anything to say. On the other hand, I hate it when people put stories on alert and then don't review, so here I am. Reviewing. Because I put this story on alert because I enjoyed it. Your characterization is good, and even though the plot seems to ramble a bit, it seems intentional, and it's not annoying or anything so it's all good :3 I like your characters and I like your descriptions. I like Peter. You don't really sugar coat anything you don't have to, and it's nice to find a story that does that. It's refreshing.
I'm going to go and watch a horror movie now and cheer myself up :)