for Stepbrothers12/19/2008 c16 
6unheardmelodies
oh noes, is it the end? Don't do this!
(just kidding obviously. would kill you dead if this WAS the end)
i was totally shoked when danny asked saul to act like he was in love with him. a pleased kind of shocked of course, but it made me realise how seriously head over heels danny is for saul. i wonder about saul, though. just how involved in this is he? in a way he seems to care less than danny, but then again is he just too closed off right now to realize himself that he's in love? or he really isn't? or just not yet? haha too many questions and i bet you're not answering any. not yet, anyway (or maybe, it's just that kind of thing when one person falls in love and the other doesn't. it happens a lot. i mean that they do care, sometimes very much, but they are obviously less involved than the other party. what the fangirl in me doesn't want, OBVIOUSLY. coz the storyline is supposed to progress, right?:) haha. ok. end rant now. pls update soon. pls?:)
6unheardmelodiesoh noes, is it the end? Don't do this!
(just kidding obviously. would kill you dead if this WAS the end)
i was totally shoked when danny asked saul to act like he was in love with him. a pleased kind of shocked of course, but it made me realise how seriously head over heels danny is for saul. i wonder about saul, though. just how involved in this is he? in a way he seems to care less than danny, but then again is he just too closed off right now to realize himself that he's in love? or he really isn't? or just not yet? haha too many questions and i bet you're not answering any. not yet, anyway (or maybe, it's just that kind of thing when one person falls in love and the other doesn't. it happens a lot. i mean that they do care, sometimes very much, but they are obviously less involved than the other party. what the fangirl in me doesn't want, OBVIOUSLY. coz the storyline is supposed to progress, right?:) haha. ok. end rant now. pls update soon. pls?:)
12/17/2008 c15 2mia5081
Same here! I mean, about being gone for a long time and not knowing about all these changes. I signed on today and kinda just stopped and stared. Everything looks different lol.
Anyways, I liked this chapter. Especially the end (so what if I'm kinda sappy). It seemed completely out of his character, but I liked the way Saul surprised Danny but sleeping in his bed.
Update soon!
~Mia
2mia5081Same here! I mean, about being gone for a long time and not knowing about all these changes. I signed on today and kinda just stopped and stared. Everything looks different lol.
Anyways, I liked this chapter. Especially the end (so what if I'm kinda sappy). It seemed completely out of his character, but I liked the way Saul surprised Danny but sleeping in his bed.
Update soon!
~Mia
12/16/2008 c15 princhi1
Omg... I love this story... thank you for writing it!
I was a bit reluctant to continue in the beginning, but I'm glad I did... :)
Can't wait to know what happens next!
Omg... I love this story... thank you for writing it!
I was a bit reluctant to continue in the beginning, but I'm glad I did... :)
Can't wait to know what happens next!
12/14/2008 c15 5Rachizzle
wtf. they changed the 'review this story' or whatever thing and I accidently added this story to my favorites because of that. :| not that it's not a good story, but, yeah. XD
anyways. D: when is Saul or Danny ever going to bring up to each other about how they used to beat each other up? I know Saul is always thinking about it but it never actually gets said, and it's really bothering me. lmao. :|
5Rachizzlewtf. they changed the 'review this story' or whatever thing and I accidently added this story to my favorites because of that. :| not that it's not a good story, but, yeah. XD
anyways. D: when is Saul or Danny ever going to bring up to each other about how they used to beat each other up? I know Saul is always thinking about it but it never actually gets said, and it's really bothering me. lmao. :|
12/14/2008 c15 6unheardmelodies
yay, an update! i kinda thought you'd abandoned this story... which would be a bad, BAD thing to do, since it's so great. i think i meantioned it already a hundred times before, but i absolutely love your style. i love how you make it sweet, but in the way that doesn't contradict the fact they're just two teenage BOYS and acting as such. i mean, that they are cute with each other but at times closed off too, and it's SO believable. well i guess i'm rambling... what i wanted to convey is that i'm in love with this story and i hope the next update doesn't take so long:)
6unheardmelodiesyay, an update! i kinda thought you'd abandoned this story... which would be a bad, BAD thing to do, since it's so great. i think i meantioned it already a hundred times before, but i absolutely love your style. i love how you make it sweet, but in the way that doesn't contradict the fact they're just two teenage BOYS and acting as such. i mean, that they are cute with each other but at times closed off too, and it's SO believable. well i guess i'm rambling... what i wanted to convey is that i'm in love with this story and i hope the next update doesn't take so long:)
12/13/2008 c15 21Faith Adeline
Good chapter, I liked it. They're cute together XD. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
21Faith AdelineGood chapter, I liked it. They're cute together XD. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
12/12/2008 c15 8the Berserker
I've just gone onto ff to see if I feel like updating anything, and I was like 'woah' when I saw all the changes to that. What a pain.
As usual, your talent blows me away. I'm glad you updated - I was rereading Stepbrothers the day before yesterday, which is a great coinkidink.
Stinky pillow... I'm used to my smell, so my pillow is prolly stinky too and I don't even know it. :P
8the BerserkerI've just gone onto ff to see if I feel like updating anything, and I was like 'woah' when I saw all the changes to that. What a pain.
As usual, your talent blows me away. I'm glad you updated - I was rereading Stepbrothers the day before yesterday, which is a great coinkidink.
Stinky pillow... I'm used to my smell, so my pillow is prolly stinky too and I don't even know it. :P
12/11/2008 c15 2slasherbynight6
wow... that was amazing.. i could pretty much feel my heart stopping and stearting again all the way throuh that.. and at the end.. i think my eyes started to water up a bit there...
the emotion in this story is just absolutely amazing! this is one of my favorite chapters in this entire story-if not my absolute favorite. i mean, the realtionship between them is fabulous, the chemistry perfect, and the dialogue amazing.. twas (at the risk of sounding cheezier than i already do) breathtaking..
honestly, you are one of the best writers on here.. keep up the great work...
oh, andl they're so cute together... :)
keith
2slasherbynight6wow... that was amazing.. i could pretty much feel my heart stopping and stearting again all the way throuh that.. and at the end.. i think my eyes started to water up a bit there...
the emotion in this story is just absolutely amazing! this is one of my favorite chapters in this entire story-if not my absolute favorite. i mean, the realtionship between them is fabulous, the chemistry perfect, and the dialogue amazing.. twas (at the risk of sounding cheezier than i already do) breathtaking..
honestly, you are one of the best writers on here.. keep up the great work...
oh, andl they're so cute together... :)
keith
12/11/2008 c15 2Naomi Schemer
I just realized that it might have been this story that got me thinking about moving out...funny.
Also, aw. These two are so adorably dysfunctional. It's great seeing you update again.
I understand how hard it is for you to update..school's a bitch. It's inherently time consuming. I'm willing to wait until you graduate :p.
2Naomi SchemerI just realized that it might have been this story that got me thinking about moving out...funny.
Also, aw. These two are so adorably dysfunctional. It's great seeing you update again.
I understand how hard it is for you to update..school's a bitch. It's inherently time consuming. I'm willing to wait until you graduate :p.
12/11/2008 c15 1Initially loaded
It was really cute. Adoring, in a everday sort of way...if that even makes sense...
1Initially loadedIt was really cute. Adoring, in a everday sort of way...if that even makes sense...