
5/1/2013 c2 Kaylin
Ooohh...interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! (hint hint)
Ooohh...interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! (hint hint)
10/7/2009 c2 lala
please please please update this! i love this beginning so much and i want to see where it goes!
please please please update this! i love this beginning so much and i want to see where it goes!
7/9/2008 c2
52Liviania
I think Tristan definitely seems more innocent that Meamin - especially since he just believes him!
Livi

I think Tristan definitely seems more innocent that Meamin - especially since he just believes him!
Livi
7/5/2008 c2 lpluver
omg one of the best plot lines ever in FP! i can't wait for updates, the story is so addictive! keep up with the excellent work!
omg one of the best plot lines ever in FP! i can't wait for updates, the story is so addictive! keep up with the excellent work!
6/21/2008 c2
8PencilSketchS
i see potential for a lot of confusion. but somehow i have more sympathy for Mimi. maybe because i met him first or because Tristen seems so much more functional. oh! what is Kae going to think of all this. i've decided, i think fate brought these boys together, in the past and now. now to fix what happened and then to put these specific pairs together, so i vote Mimi Kae and Soren Tristen.

i see potential for a lot of confusion. but somehow i have more sympathy for Mimi. maybe because i met him first or because Tristen seems so much more functional. oh! what is Kae going to think of all this. i've decided, i think fate brought these boys together, in the past and now. now to fix what happened and then to put these specific pairs together, so i vote Mimi Kae and Soren Tristen.
6/21/2008 c1 PencilSketchS
firstly, i loved the NOT INCEST exclamation. secondly, that was by far the boldest scene i've read of urs yet! and i don't mean that in a bad way. then in sum total i love the attitude that this story has going. Mimi is intimidating. he could so kick Shanye's ass if the occasion ever arose. tho i still love Shanye. Soren and Kae? don't they look a bit alike too? i can't decide. but i think being raised from birth as brothers should put somewhat of a damper on a Kae Mimi match up. plus Mimi should not try to replace Kae with Soren. personally i have no clue who to pair off together. finally: ha! swopped at birth!
firstly, i loved the NOT INCEST exclamation. secondly, that was by far the boldest scene i've read of urs yet! and i don't mean that in a bad way. then in sum total i love the attitude that this story has going. Mimi is intimidating. he could so kick Shanye's ass if the occasion ever arose. tho i still love Shanye. Soren and Kae? don't they look a bit alike too? i can't decide. but i think being raised from birth as brothers should put somewhat of a damper on a Kae Mimi match up. plus Mimi should not try to replace Kae with Soren. personally i have no clue who to pair off together. finally: ha! swopped at birth!
6/12/2008 c2
7Cedric Kale
woo. Twins? I though he was twins with thingy ma jig... whatever his name was or is Meamin joking again. I love Tristan's tone, it's funny but he's stuck up and so... stuck up.

woo. Twins? I though he was twins with thingy ma jig... whatever his name was or is Meamin joking again. I love Tristan's tone, it's funny but he's stuck up and so... stuck up.
6/10/2008 c2 Nontoxicsharpie
Can't say I'm not highly amused.
Okay, okay, I love it.
But Identity?
Please.
-addiction-
Can't say I'm not highly amused.
Okay, okay, I love it.
But Identity?
Please.
-addiction-
6/10/2008 c2
20Darkladyknight
I really like this story, it confuses me, but then again for me that's not hard! I know, with you it just patients that I need and I will see it all clearly in the end, lol. I like every story I've read of yours and always look forward to reading whatever you're putting out or updating! Thanks for such great work!
Dark

I really like this story, it confuses me, but then again for me that's not hard! I know, with you it just patients that I need and I will see it all clearly in the end, lol. I like every story I've read of yours and always look forward to reading whatever you're putting out or updating! Thanks for such great work!
Dark
6/10/2008 c2
17Cattails
Tristan is definitely the more emotional of the two. I feel sorry for Maemin...first day of school and already he's being attacked? Now, that's just mean. Hm...I wonder if they actually are twins...? That'd be interesting :P

Tristan is definitely the more emotional of the two. I feel sorry for Maemin...first day of school and already he's being attacked? Now, that's just mean. Hm...I wonder if they actually are twins...? That'd be interesting :P
6/10/2008 c2 Corrupted Lungs
Yeah I know, I was just saying.
Wait, does Mae know he is? Or is he just being an ass?
Yeah I know, I was just saying.
Wait, does Mae know he is? Or is he just being an ass?
6/9/2008 c1
12Kurohane Shizumi
I'm liking~! (As usual. *chuckle*)
As for couples... hm... Well, Since the other brother doesn't necessarily like the brother's appearance I think it would go something like this:
Maemin/Tristan and Kaesel/Soren (if Soren could somehow convince Kaesel to come to the dark side *bwahahahaha*)
Yes, so, How do you pronounce those brother's names?
~Shizu ^_^

I'm liking~! (As usual. *chuckle*)
As for couples... hm... Well, Since the other brother doesn't necessarily like the brother's appearance I think it would go something like this:
Maemin/Tristan and Kaesel/Soren (if Soren could somehow convince Kaesel to come to the dark side *bwahahahaha*)
Yes, so, How do you pronounce those brother's names?
~Shizu ^_^