for Looking Back8/7/2008 c1 cab fed hig
This is really (for lack of a better word) ...cool.
I can relate to some of it, and you certainly have a way with words. Nice work =)
This is really (for lack of a better word) ...cool.
I can relate to some of it, and you certainly have a way with words. Nice work =)
7/18/2008 c1 
1BloomingInTheNight
ok, so i thought i reviewed this, but i guess not...i really liked it, and again(like with all that you write) i feel the emotion seeping from your words
1BloomingInTheNightok, so i thought i reviewed this, but i guess not...i really liked it, and again(like with all that you write) i feel the emotion seeping from your words
6/26/2008 c1 brokencrystal7
this remind me of my poem that you reviewed on. that is how i feel right now too and i hope that i can get over it.
this remind me of my poem that you reviewed on. that is how i feel right now too and i hope that i can get over it.
6/7/2008 c1 10Kinetic Wolf
Interesting approach, and very well done. It had a nice flow and a powerful message. I've had thos times as well, keep writing.
10Kinetic WolfInteresting approach, and very well done. It had a nice flow and a powerful message. I've had thos times as well, keep writing.
5/31/2008 c1 Counting Petals
One thing: "I couldn’t wait to grow up, what was I thinking." Should be a question.
Other than that, though, I loved this. You got the emotion across very well. Nicely done!
One thing: "I couldn’t wait to grow up, what was I thinking." Should be a question.
Other than that, though, I loved this. You got the emotion across very well. Nicely done!
5/31/2008 c1 5summertime thoughts
its great. i love how the sentences are long and keep flowing. keep writing!
5summertime thoughtsits great. i love how the sentences are long and keep flowing. keep writing!
5/31/2008 c1 72eja-SAN
Wow...tthis was a great...prose I believe it's called *you know, where it starts as a poem, but ends up not really a poem?* Anyways...this is great. It sounds like things that happened to me...LOVE IT *favorites it*
72eja-SANWow...tthis was a great...prose I believe it's called *you know, where it starts as a poem, but ends up not really a poem?* Anyways...this is great. It sounds like things that happened to me...LOVE IT *favorites it*
5/30/2008 c1 3I'll Break Your Heart
I like this. Your characters thoughts and feelings are very thought provoking. I enjoyed reading it. Anyway great story.
:)
3I'll Break Your HeartI like this. Your characters thoughts and feelings are very thought provoking. I enjoyed reading it. Anyway great story.
:)
5/29/2008 c1 102Aomera
wow you've caught such emotion in this piece, and the faiy-tale ending/dream stuff/ impatientness is great! the first sentence is quite long and the third doesnt flow (to me) - just the first few words seem a little muddeled (?) but apart from that its lovely, with wonderful language - 'so are you going to chew me' ! good job. keep writing.
102Aomerawow you've caught such emotion in this piece, and the faiy-tale ending/dream stuff/ impatientness is great! the first sentence is quite long and the third doesnt flow (to me) - just the first few words seem a little muddeled (?) but apart from that its lovely, with wonderful language - 'so are you going to chew me' ! good job. keep writing.