for The Same Time Everyday11/12/2008 c1 
13blurrylights
That was such a creative piece! I like how it was from a boy's point of view, and the description. I loved the way they met, and the ending was so sweet! Beautiful job. :)
13blurrylightsThat was such a creative piece! I like how it was from a boy's point of view, and the description. I loved the way they met, and the ending was so sweet! Beautiful job. :)
11/6/2008 c1 ghostparties
hey! I might be a little late with the review, but I have to say that it was really good! keep writing!
xx
PS: did you intentionally name the characters after james and maria from Silent Hill 2? Or was that a coincidence? =]
hey! I might be a little late with the review, but I have to say that it was really good! keep writing!
xx
PS: did you intentionally name the characters after james and maria from Silent Hill 2? Or was that a coincidence? =]
10/9/2008 c1 2EnchantedKorean
I've been looking for a one-shot from a guy's POV, and wow, you did it well...except for some grammatical errors (particularly between you're and your), it was good...well done!
2EnchantedKoreanI've been looking for a one-shot from a guy's POV, and wow, you did it well...except for some grammatical errors (particularly between you're and your), it was good...well done!
9/30/2008 c1 3if.i.had.1.wish
Oh. My. God. That is AMAZING. No joke. Oh gosh I don't even know where to start, it was incredible. Favourite stories without a doubt! I am so jealous lol you write better than me, no fair. Btw I only realised like half way through that it was guy and the person on the bench was a girl lol haha, but you know how slow I am. LOVE this, it sorta hit the heart.. made me smile out loud :P ..I love the part where he says he knows why he smiles at her at the start, and at the end where he says he's afraid he'll break her hand. And nice use of the quote! :D Chica Xx
3if.i.had.1.wishOh. My. God. That is AMAZING. No joke. Oh gosh I don't even know where to start, it was incredible. Favourite stories without a doubt! I am so jealous lol you write better than me, no fair. Btw I only realised like half way through that it was guy and the person on the bench was a girl lol haha, but you know how slow I am. LOVE this, it sorta hit the heart.. made me smile out loud :P ..I love the part where he says he knows why he smiles at her at the start, and at the end where he says he's afraid he'll break her hand. And nice use of the quote! :D Chica Xx
8/10/2008 c1 19toffeecakesxox
Aww! I didn't even know it was a guy's POV until the roommate part. Hahaha, talk about smart. :P
I loved it though! :D
Strawberry xx
19toffeecakesxoxAww! I didn't even know it was a guy's POV until the roommate part. Hahaha, talk about smart. :P
I loved it though! :D
Strawberry xx
8/4/2008 c1 7choirluvr
I just read this story and when I finished I realized I was smiling :) Your writing really makes a person feel something ya know?. Keep up the good work.
7choirluvrI just read this story and when I finished I realized I was smiling :) Your writing really makes a person feel something ya know?. Keep up the good work.
6/6/2008 c1 saNyu hIkArI
Cute. I like the idea of a gal sketching the picture of a guy instead of the other way around. Makes the whole idea a lot less cliche. However, you must have whipped it up too good since your grammar was all juggled up. Try to fix it up.
Cute. I like the idea of a gal sketching the picture of a guy instead of the other way around. Makes the whole idea a lot less cliche. However, you must have whipped it up too good since your grammar was all juggled up. Try to fix it up.
6/5/2008 c1 manutdmad
that was nice , cute
but i really thought that it was written in a girls POV and got confused when they exchanged names , some use of pronouns would have helped alot
apart frm that , it was well written and i dont recalls mistakes as such
cheers :]
that was nice , cute
but i really thought that it was written in a girls POV and got confused when they exchanged names , some use of pronouns would have helped alot
apart frm that , it was well written and i dont recalls mistakes as such
cheers :]