for The Same Time Everyday6/5/2008 c1 
9Lily Llynn
Cliche? Yes. Cute? Yes. Good oneshot? Yes. (:
Yes I was thinking it was a girl at the beginning (not that I'm one to talk, since I am a girl, and I'm pretty sure my guys sound feminine too, but generally I've noticed when authors use guy POV, there are some masculine nuances that make it easier for the reader to identify the gender). But this is pretty well-written and as I said, cute. I especially love the last lines. (: *adds to c2*
9Lily LlynnCliche? Yes. Cute? Yes. Good oneshot? Yes. (:
Yes I was thinking it was a girl at the beginning (not that I'm one to talk, since I am a girl, and I'm pretty sure my guys sound feminine too, but generally I've noticed when authors use guy POV, there are some masculine nuances that make it easier for the reader to identify the gender). But this is pretty well-written and as I said, cute. I especially love the last lines. (: *adds to c2*
6/2/2008 c1 1creamygirl
wow im really impressed with this, its really good and i really liked it that you kept back the genders of each person until the end of the story. i really like it just like your other stuff, congrats
1creamygirlwow im really impressed with this, its really good and i really liked it that you kept back the genders of each person until the end of the story. i really like it just like your other stuff, congrats