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11/6/2011 c1 9Cydog2
fantastic.
6/4/2008 c1 65Nemonus
Ah! Nice rhythm and timing, especially between the last line and the second-to-last. You've got an "It'd" that should be an "I'd" in the second stanza, and the last two lines of that stanza don't rhyme well. However, otherwise, I like this.

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