for Bra Sizes Don't Matter10/5/2018 c11 
13Shailaputri
The concluding chapter is very nice. The simple humor dialogue has some rooting from her parents divorce..didn't expect that. That seems meaningful.
13ShailaputriThe concluding chapter is very nice. The simple humor dialogue has some rooting from her parents divorce..didn't expect that. That seems meaningful.
1/29/2011 c11 Genato
The thing I've loved most in the story is the conversation. You really have a knack in them. I think you should be a screenwriter with this potential.
However, your details.. are so... girlishly... puke-y? I don't mind half of them but it's so... random. Although I did get that the narration was a main character who was really random and since it's her narration, it could be random, it was a bit... hard to read. I would have liked more details, more coherent thoughts, more organized and transition in between thoughts.
But thanks for your fic. It made me laugh lots of times. :)
The thing I've loved most in the story is the conversation. You really have a knack in them. I think you should be a screenwriter with this potential.
However, your details.. are so... girlishly... puke-y? I don't mind half of them but it's so... random. Although I did get that the narration was a main character who was really random and since it's her narration, it could be random, it was a bit... hard to read. I would have liked more details, more coherent thoughts, more organized and transition in between thoughts.
But thanks for your fic. It made me laugh lots of times. :)
4/14/2010 c11 sarcasm is my middle name
Haha, that's funny! Love Brandon, maybe do an epilogue? Or a sequel?
Haha, that's funny! Love Brandon, maybe do an epilogue? Or a sequel?
11/27/2009 c1 Dreamless-Wonder
Bra sizes really shouldn't matter. :) Cute idea for a story. Going to read more now...
Bra sizes really shouldn't matter. :) Cute idea for a story. Going to read more now...
6/23/2009 c1 AdiGal
A brilliant start. I can't wait to read the rest.
-AG :)
A brilliant start. I can't wait to read the rest.
-AG :)