for PreSasquatch5/31/2008 c1 
306Ashelin
I hoped that Sasquatch lived up to it. The beginning of the poem seems a little disconnected from the rest of it, but it works. Did you mean to write music like "mussic"? It's all right. I loved "like a tidal/wave, a whole/ocean of artwork,/absorbed in one moment." Because it's so like that, isn't it? Especially the good music. Or maybe only the good music. But I still have a slight appreciation for the musicians who I think are a little incompetant because they actually made it somewhere and someone likes them. Anyway, I'm rambling. Good poem.
306AshelinI hoped that Sasquatch lived up to it. The beginning of the poem seems a little disconnected from the rest of it, but it works. Did you mean to write music like "mussic"? It's all right. I loved "like a tidal/wave, a whole/ocean of artwork,/absorbed in one moment." Because it's so like that, isn't it? Especially the good music. Or maybe only the good music. But I still have a slight appreciation for the musicians who I think are a little incompetant because they actually made it somewhere and someone likes them. Anyway, I'm rambling. Good poem.