for Butterfly Kiss8/5/2020 c1 Guest
very VERY cute and loving
very VERY cute and loving
12/14/2013 c1 
73AlysonSerenaStone
I really enjoyed reading this! You are one of the best one shot writers that I have seen!
73AlysonSerenaStoneI really enjoyed reading this! You are one of the best one shot writers that I have seen!
12/12/2013 c1 blue21
i absolutely loved it...
reading this kinda felt bittersweet, cause i used to like this guy once, and you know same story...after high school, the friendship just became strained and now we're at texting each other like once a month or so...tragic i know -_
but all i got for my seventeenth birthday was a text. i like your version better. can you write more? i would love to see where this goes...
bluechocolate21
ps sorry for the backstory...i know it doesnt really matter to anyone but me
i absolutely loved it...
reading this kinda felt bittersweet, cause i used to like this guy once, and you know same story...after high school, the friendship just became strained and now we're at texting each other like once a month or so...tragic i know -_
but all i got for my seventeenth birthday was a text. i like your version better. can you write more? i would love to see where this goes...
bluechocolate21
ps sorry for the backstory...i know it doesnt really matter to anyone but me
4/22/2012 c1 7girlincombatboots1907
Lovely! My heart kinda skipped a beat when the two kissed. It was just perfect! Keep shining, stay awesome! G'luck! :)
7girlincombatboots1907Lovely! My heart kinda skipped a beat when the two kissed. It was just perfect! Keep shining, stay awesome! G'luck! :)
4/29/2009 c1 24Ravina
Cute story, but I would have liked to see him make up for lost time before she took him back...but that's just my sadistic side speaking.
Great job!
- Rebekah
24RavinaCute story, but I would have liked to see him make up for lost time before she took him back...but that's just my sadistic side speaking.
Great job!
- Rebekah
3/20/2009 c1 13blurrylights
I really liked this...it was just so sweet. And it's okay to make up words. Artistic freedom! Look at Dr. Seuss, for example. :)
13blurrylightsI really liked this...it was just so sweet. And it's okay to make up words. Artistic freedom! Look at Dr. Seuss, for example. :)
2/7/2009 c1 19toffeecakesxox
-squeal- very cute! super cute! so happy-face-slash-grin worthy! SERIOUSLY, you, girl, have talented oneshot writing skills. they're all so cute and meaningful and brighten up the world a little bit more. :D
-toffeecakesxox. :)
19toffeecakesxox-squeal- very cute! super cute! so happy-face-slash-grin worthy! SERIOUSLY, you, girl, have talented oneshot writing skills. they're all so cute and meaningful and brighten up the world a little bit more. :D
-toffeecakesxox. :)
6/19/2008 c1 9Lily Llynn
It's gorgeous writing, but I'd love to know more (less vagueness). Why did they fall apart? Why does he suddenly want to fix their relationship?
I do still love it (fluff love. (: ), and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added it to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnIt's gorgeous writing, but I'd love to know more (less vagueness). Why did they fall apart? Why does he suddenly want to fix their relationship?
I do still love it (fluff love. (: ), and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added it to our c2. (:
6/5/2008 c1 3Kadekksys
Aw! I loved it! I like the little about how of course she has him as a contact- for emergencies only. right. Loved that ;)Such a cute ending, too! That was great, cause I'm pretty sure that I'm REALLY hoping for my wish to somehow be Mrs. Ben Barnes is gonna come true. :P Anyways, loved it.
3KadekksysAw! I loved it! I like the little about how of course she has him as a contact- for emergencies only. right. Loved that ;)Such a cute ending, too! That was great, cause I'm pretty sure that I'm REALLY hoping for my wish to somehow be Mrs. Ben Barnes is gonna come true. :P Anyways, loved it.
6/3/2008 c1 3starlit x sky
I really liked this!
I think the summary's fine, and as for the story, it's brilliant! I liked how you mentioned the butterfly near the end.
Good job!
3starlit x skyI really liked this!
I think the summary's fine, and as for the story, it's brilliant! I liked how you mentioned the butterfly near the end.
Good job!