for all I need7/14/2008 c1 
70PoetryQueen
Very good! I liked it. Maybe you could break the first line into 2 lines. Just a thought. Great job!
70PoetryQueenVery good! I liked it. Maybe you could break the first line into 2 lines. Just a thought. Great job!
6/2/2008 c1 115Random-Idiocity
Mind racing and out of control, we all go through these feelings. I thought you did a good job describing how you can feel towards someone. I also like how this is short, yet simple and has nice flow. Keep it Up!
115Random-IdiocityMind racing and out of control, we all go through these feelings. I thought you did a good job describing how you can feel towards someone. I also like how this is short, yet simple and has nice flow. Keep it Up!