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6/5/2008 c1 84tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis
yeah, what's with the 'thee' Juliet? "Oh Romeo, oh Romeo, for where arth thou thy Romeo?" lol. jk, jk.

the repitition of "7:03" was a little too much for me. stalker much for knowing the exact minute?
6/3/2008 c1 130D351
Cute and very well done. The only "fault" I can see is the use of "thee". The rest of the piece is so modern and human that it just doesn't fit. Other than that though the whole piece is great and the repetition works well.

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