for Outside the Window1/12/2010 c1 G.M.Smith
WOW :) beautiful poem! love it, though i don't get how the first two lines are the same, but besides that the rest is awesome!
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WOW :) beautiful poem! love it, though i don't get how the first two lines are the same, but besides that the rest is awesome!
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-Ashes In The Snow- I've always loved watching the wolves, observing their wild beauty. Then dad shot him, the one with the bluish, smoky gray fur, the beautiful one, the one i loved the most. I rushed him to the vet clinic, trying to save his life. When he changed into a human it changed my life.
-The White Rose- Every year a girl is stolen, taken by the beast that lives in the woods. Dililah (thinking of changing name)is taken, stolen away by a monster. He falls in love with her. She falls in love with him. And the curse is broken... -story inspired by 'Beauty and the Beast'
-Darkness and Light, Love and Death (a book of poetry) -I’ve been compared to Edgar Allen Poe in poetry!- A voice in the dark often unheard...demonic voices whispering in my head...feeding words to my heart...a frightening mix of genres...genres not always light, not always dark...always beautiful...always frightening...frighteningly dark...beautifully dark.
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12/8/2008 c1 
8Irresistible Apple
I love this! The imagery was absolutely stunning and gorgeous and I adored the absence of any sort of structure. I can't find anything to criticize.
8Irresistible AppleI love this! The imagery was absolutely stunning and gorgeous and I adored the absence of any sort of structure. I can't find anything to criticize.
6/4/2008 c1 3write-the-world
This is amazing. I really love the imagery in it... and the repetition in the beginning was gorgeous. I can't believe you never posted this! It's SO GOOD! It is definitely one of my favorites of yours.
You're officially way braver than I am, too.
Eventually, Caroline will gather the guts to post some poetry, but that day is not today. :D
3write-the-worldThis is amazing. I really love the imagery in it... and the repetition in the beginning was gorgeous. I can't believe you never posted this! It's SO GOOD! It is definitely one of my favorites of yours.
You're officially way braver than I am, too.
Eventually, Caroline will gather the guts to post some poetry, but that day is not today. :D