
7/17/2008 c9
1Izzey
i don't think it sucked. okay, maybe just a little, but not really. please update again soon.

i don't think it sucked. okay, maybe just a little, but not really. please update again soon.
7/13/2008 c2 Lauren Michelle
LMAO!
I just read 'Mr.Emery' and almost started laughing, its 1AM and I'm not realy allowed to use my laptop, so..
But srsly that was funny, go on
LMAO!
I just read 'Mr.Emery' and almost started laughing, its 1AM and I'm not realy allowed to use my laptop, so..
But srsly that was funny, go on
6/11/2008 c1 VVastedtime
Hi! I like it so far! It's SUPER good! -thumbs up-
hehe...ok i have to go..bye!
Hi! I like it so far! It's SUPER good! -thumbs up-
hehe...ok i have to go..bye!
6/8/2008 c8 Izzey
omg! i would love to be an assassin. i reckon it would be awesome. anywayz, awesome chapter. i cant wait to find out what happens next
omg! i would love to be an assassin. i reckon it would be awesome. anywayz, awesome chapter. i cant wait to find out what happens next
6/6/2008 c6 lifeispeachy278
hey i liked your story! i would like to know what the 3 girls actually look like. Oh and add in some more terms to the context, like "spy" lingo or weapons types. yeah pretty awesome otherwise.
hey i liked your story! i would like to know what the 3 girls actually look like. Oh and add in some more terms to the context, like "spy" lingo or weapons types. yeah pretty awesome otherwise.
6/5/2008 c4 annette15
This story is pretty interesting so keep up the good work. I can't wait to read chapter 5.
This story is pretty interesting so keep up the good work. I can't wait to read chapter 5.
6/5/2008 c5
1sucker-4-green-eyes
I think its a really cool idea, and the start is really good, I think.
anyway, cant wait till i read the rest!
But maybe, you could have more description included in the story. Just so its a bit clearer and so that we know exactly where they are, what it looks like and whats going on.
Good Luck!

I think its a really cool idea, and the start is really good, I think.
anyway, cant wait till i read the rest!
But maybe, you could have more description included in the story. Just so its a bit clearer and so that we know exactly where they are, what it looks like and whats going on.
Good Luck!