
6/25/2016 c2 Modaghair
I like it, but I realized early in this chapter that I have no idea what the narrator is. Is she a human or a high demon or something else entirely? In addition, I don't know how much the characters are joking about her brother having minions. It could be completely literal or half-joking, the way an employer shares a smile with close employees. Some clarification worked in there would make it better.
I like it, but I realized early in this chapter that I have no idea what the narrator is. Is she a human or a high demon or something else entirely? In addition, I don't know how much the characters are joking about her brother having minions. It could be completely literal or half-joking, the way an employer shares a smile with close employees. Some clarification worked in there would make it better.
6/21/2016 c1 wericdream
I really hope you read this...this first chapter is up on wattpad now. I really hope its you on wattpad, but I have this feeling its not which pusses me off because that means some is trying to still your work
I really hope you read this...this first chapter is up on wattpad now. I really hope its you on wattpad, but I have this feeling its not which pusses me off because that means some is trying to still your work
4/8/2016 c1 Erpae
Amazing. Loved it. I like the way you phrase things.
Amazing. Loved it. I like the way you phrase things.
11/11/2015 c14 wericdream
You and one other writer are the ONLY reason I come on this site, because you're both so good with such original stories and you're both KILLING! me with your hiatusness. I swear either ya'll (excuse me, I'm from the Southern part of the US ant it's how we talk) are either the same person, or ya'll have teamed up to destroy my life because I neeeeeeeeeeeeed your stories. My baby is going to be born before either of ya'll update! The other author is MadameLeQueen of "My Wolf Boy", and I need to know what happens to her Aurora and Orion just like I need to know what happens with your characters! Raze and Marah for life! Please come back, please!
You and one other writer are the ONLY reason I come on this site, because you're both so good with such original stories and you're both KILLING! me with your hiatusness. I swear either ya'll (excuse me, I'm from the Southern part of the US ant it's how we talk) are either the same person, or ya'll have teamed up to destroy my life because I neeeeeeeeeeeeed your stories. My baby is going to be born before either of ya'll update! The other author is MadameLeQueen of "My Wolf Boy", and I need to know what happens to her Aurora and Orion just like I need to know what happens with your characters! Raze and Marah for life! Please come back, please!
3/16/2015 c14 Recreszix
I have just stumbled upon this story and already I am in love. I would pay you to finish it. Not even joking.
None the less, I hope all is well in your life
Take care!
-Recres
I have just stumbled upon this story and already I am in love. I would pay you to finish it. Not even joking.
None the less, I hope all is well in your life
Take care!
-Recres
3/11/2015 c13 Pseudonym59
Oh no, the whole family thing with the company was so touching and now they're dead/dying/tortured. :(
I really like how even though Adrian isn't stable, he still has depth.
Also, I'm really curious as to what the incident was with Marah.
Oh no, the whole family thing with the company was so touching and now they're dead/dying/tortured. :(
I really like how even though Adrian isn't stable, he still has depth.
Also, I'm really curious as to what the incident was with Marah.
3/11/2015 c10 Pseudonym59
Ahhh, from the moment Haybell was explaining what each nymph could do, I knew Cassy was a supernatural. :D
Ahhh, from the moment Haybell was explaining what each nymph could do, I knew Cassy was a supernatural. :D
1/20/2015 c14 Visitor
I'm really enjoying reading this story! I think this is such a creative concept and hoping that u will continue the story especially after such a major cliff hanger! I think it's really well written although I wouldn't know, but I got sucked in so that's gotta say something ;) please keep going!
I'm really enjoying reading this story! I think this is such a creative concept and hoping that u will continue the story especially after such a major cliff hanger! I think it's really well written although I wouldn't know, but I got sucked in so that's gotta say something ;) please keep going!
12/17/2014 c14 LetMeWonder
I hope you do eventually come back- I'm excited to see how the story plays!
I hope you do eventually come back- I'm excited to see how the story plays!
3/7/2014 c1 FreeSpirited13
Hey… awesome story. Read it from start to finish all in a day :D Has this been discontinued? Hope not.
Hey… awesome story. Read it from start to finish all in a day :D Has this been discontinued? Hope not.
8/31/2013 c14
9Cookie Seller On The Dark Side
This has been fabulous so far, and I'm sure thousands of readers would be ever so pleased if you continued.
Well done!
-Cookie Seller On The Dark Side.

This has been fabulous so far, and I'm sure thousands of readers would be ever so pleased if you continued.
Well done!
-Cookie Seller On The Dark Side.
6/10/2013 c14 DoveyGirl 3
Awwwwww if u don't update I won't know wat happens with marah and raze, questions like are marah and raze in love or are they gonna fall for each other plus whos gonna fall for the other first? Raze or Marah? God I hope raze falls for marah first then finally convincing marah to give 'em a chance, lord I almost would begg u to make raze fall for marah and them to be a couple cause I imagine raze as an hot-shot, hotty whom is gonna fall heads for marah, a cute, pretty sweetheart of his-to-be-mate xoxo! 3 3 3
Awwwwww if u don't update I won't know wat happens with marah and raze, questions like are marah and raze in love or are they gonna fall for each other plus whos gonna fall for the other first? Raze or Marah? God I hope raze falls for marah first then finally convincing marah to give 'em a chance, lord I almost would begg u to make raze fall for marah and them to be a couple cause I imagine raze as an hot-shot, hotty whom is gonna fall heads for marah, a cute, pretty sweetheart of his-to-be-mate xoxo! 3 3 3