for Dandelion Wishes8/11/2008 c1 
1Just Nilla
-claps- I love it. Absolutely, one hundred percent, LOVE this. I really think you did a great job with this one. It caught my interest right away and kept it. I don't know anything I'd tell you to change about it! No wonder why it got published! XD It's BRILLIANT! In my opinion, that is!
"They blow it away like sea foam off a wave" I must say that this sentence is great. I really like the simile. =D
Keep up the great work!
~Jen a.k.a. WritingInTheSand
1Just Nilla-claps- I love it. Absolutely, one hundred percent, LOVE this. I really think you did a great job with this one. It caught my interest right away and kept it. I don't know anything I'd tell you to change about it! No wonder why it got published! XD It's BRILLIANT! In my opinion, that is!
"They blow it away like sea foam off a wave" I must say that this sentence is great. I really like the simile. =D
Keep up the great work!
~Jen a.k.a. WritingInTheSand