for Confused Musings of a Girl Who Gets Shrek8/22/2016 c13 
6Larry Boodry
That was amazing, I can't wait to read your other stuff...Are you still writing?
6Larry BoodryThat was amazing, I can't wait to read your other stuff...Are you still writing?
8/22/2016 c7 Larry Boodry
More Juliet, maybe? She sounds like someone I'd write, although maybe not making out with her sister's boyfriend.
More Juliet, maybe? She sounds like someone I'd write, although maybe not making out with her sister's boyfriend.
10/6/2012 c13 Anon
Great story :)
Great story :)
11/6/2011 c13 ReadingForKicks
I really liked this story!
I like how it wasnt focused on love, ad wasnt a cliched story!
But a story of what most teenage girls go through, obviously a bit more intense!
The only reason i dont LOVE it is because it ended to soon!
I think you could kf done about two more chapters an it would of explained the fast ending abit better :)
Otherthan that
A good read
Harley
Xxxx
I really liked this story!
I like how it wasnt focused on love, ad wasnt a cliched story!
But a story of what most teenage girls go through, obviously a bit more intense!
The only reason i dont LOVE it is because it ended to soon!
I think you could kf done about two more chapters an it would of explained the fast ending abit better :)
Otherthan that
A good read
Harley
Xxxx
7/11/2010 c1 2hyperactiveturtle
You're amazing. I've never read such a short story that was so incredibly touching - it covered all the things that other people have to go into such detail to recreate, and you did it perfectly.
I'm not a grammar nazi, and to be honest, if you had any mistakes, I didn't notice them. This was just bloody brilliant, and I have no words... except now I'm obviously going to try to read all your stuff. :)
2hyperactiveturtleYou're amazing. I've never read such a short story that was so incredibly touching - it covered all the things that other people have to go into such detail to recreate, and you did it perfectly.
I'm not a grammar nazi, and to be honest, if you had any mistakes, I didn't notice them. This was just bloody brilliant, and I have no words... except now I'm obviously going to try to read all your stuff. :)
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9/1/2009 c13 14its.Nothing.Special
You honestly make me want to write something crazy and beautiful and real. So thanks. I'm favoriting you now.
;)becky
14its.Nothing.SpecialYou honestly make me want to write something crazy and beautiful and real. So thanks. I'm favoriting you now.
;)becky
8/22/2009 c13 Wolfmonster
Aww - I don't know why (I don't even know if you still read your reviews; you did complete it almost a year ago), but this story is one of my favourites. ^_^
It's obvious that you really know your characters, and I love the way there are so many issues incorporated into it - parenting, eating disorders, love, sex, popularity - and your writing style. Skimming over stuff / not going into too much detail keeps the story light, but you still manage to pick out and write about all the important bits in Emory's life. Emory and Steven are lovely characters, and it's just a really nice, 'feel good' story. Short, but fittingly short, if you get what I mean.
So, basically, thanks.
:) :) :)
Aww - I don't know why (I don't even know if you still read your reviews; you did complete it almost a year ago), but this story is one of my favourites. ^_^
It's obvious that you really know your characters, and I love the way there are so many issues incorporated into it - parenting, eating disorders, love, sex, popularity - and your writing style. Skimming over stuff / not going into too much detail keeps the story light, but you still manage to pick out and write about all the important bits in Emory's life. Emory and Steven are lovely characters, and it's just a really nice, 'feel good' story. Short, but fittingly short, if you get what I mean.
So, basically, thanks.
:) :) :)
6/11/2009 c13 1storywritergirl
I like this story. It's got this sweet, simple quirkiness or something to it that makes it likeable. The last chapters seemed a fair bit more fast-paced than the earlier ones, but I really like your writing style.
:)
1storywritergirlI like this story. It's got this sweet, simple quirkiness or something to it that makes it likeable. The last chapters seemed a fair bit more fast-paced than the earlier ones, but I really like your writing style.
:)