for When She Smiles9/11/2015 c1 
12MTveit
Oooh, I really like this one shot! I love reading from male perspectives, and this one blew my mind. It's sweet, short, romantic, everything a one shot should be. Thanks for posting!
12MTveitOooh, I really like this one shot! I love reading from male perspectives, and this one blew my mind. It's sweet, short, romantic, everything a one shot should be. Thanks for posting!
10/12/2014 c1 1my princess ending
This warms my heart so much. As I read through this story, I can feel what the girl is feeling but at the same time I feel what the guy is feeling too. It's so clear that he likes her but doesn't know it yet. I love the way you wrote it because it's so realistic and touching.
1my princess endingThis warms my heart so much. As I read through this story, I can feel what the girl is feeling but at the same time I feel what the guy is feeling too. It's so clear that he likes her but doesn't know it yet. I love the way you wrote it because it's so realistic and touching.
8/31/2014 c1 Julietish
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written for it: This is a story I remember reading a long time ago that has always been stuck in my head and only recently have I been able to find it. It is told from the male's point of view, usually difficult to pull off, but mandybeth most definitely succeeds; instead of being soppy in any way, the protagonist is stubborn, cutting, witty and completely oblivious. Yet he always tries to make the unnamed female protagonist smile, without knowing why. The story unfurls after she reveals that her boyfriend Preston proposed, a man who doesn't earn a favorable description. The story is very well written, making you feel for the characters, particularly frustration and the grammar is perfect throughout - difficult to accomplish when writing in the present tense. Plus the fact it's incredibly cute.
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written for it: This is a story I remember reading a long time ago that has always been stuck in my head and only recently have I been able to find it. It is told from the male's point of view, usually difficult to pull off, but mandybeth most definitely succeeds; instead of being soppy in any way, the protagonist is stubborn, cutting, witty and completely oblivious. Yet he always tries to make the unnamed female protagonist smile, without knowing why. The story unfurls after she reveals that her boyfriend Preston proposed, a man who doesn't earn a favorable description. The story is very well written, making you feel for the characters, particularly frustration and the grammar is perfect throughout - difficult to accomplish when writing in the present tense. Plus the fact it's incredibly cute.
1/28/2014 c1 Jess
This story is adorable :-)
This story is adorable :-)
7/1/2013 c1 Yi
I love your writing style. You write perspectives beautifully and this jerk's (his words, not mine) thought flow is flawlessly written. I could go on singing your praises.
I love your writing style. You write perspectives beautifully and this jerk's (his words, not mine) thought flow is flawlessly written. I could go on singing your praises.
6/20/2013 c1 Anonymous
This so cute! I loved this one-shot! Im thinking to make an account just to favourite it or something! :D Its really awesome :)
This so cute! I loved this one-shot! Im thinking to make an account just to favourite it or something! :D Its really awesome :)
10/27/2012 c1 7Dandy352
Maybe he could be less of an arrogant being and admit that she likes her too with pure humility :) But never mind that, every couple has their own love story :) I liked what you wrote! Good job!
7Dandy352Maybe he could be less of an arrogant being and admit that she likes her too with pure humility :) But never mind that, every couple has their own love story :) I liked what you wrote! Good job!
10/10/2012 c1 teen
it's a good one shot. I like it.
it's a good one shot. I like it.
10/2/2012 c1 salma
i love it!
i love it!
7/2/2012 c1 The Quotidian Life
omg omg omg! I LOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEE IT! It's amazing! Definitely goes on my favourite list!
omg omg omg! I LOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEE IT! It's amazing! Definitely goes on my favourite list!