
6/6/2008 c1
17Unique1952
Nice work. I like the metaphors and the imagery of the sheets blowing in the wind and scattering on the pavement, nice. I like your symbolic use of the inkwell, sad, but very nice all the same.

Nice work. I like the metaphors and the imagery of the sheets blowing in the wind and scattering on the pavement, nice. I like your symbolic use of the inkwell, sad, but very nice all the same.