8/13/2008 c2 raecheleatrhino
Well this is definitely different. But... I like it! C:
I can't wait to see what happens next. C:
Well this is definitely different. But... I like it! C:
I can't wait to see what happens next. C:
8/12/2008 c1 Rioichi
Hey! This reminds me of my story! Well, something that's going to happen in my story. Well, Karmie's mother is keeping something from her, but that's for me to know and you to find out! Lol. on to chapter two!
Hey! This reminds me of my story! Well, something that's going to happen in my story. Well, Karmie's mother is keeping something from her, but that's for me to know and you to find out! Lol. on to chapter two!
8/6/2008 c1 She Who Twirls Flags
Very good. I love it and I'm adding it to my fav's!
Anyway, keep writing and update ASAP!
~TTA
Very good. I love it and I'm adding it to my fav's!
Anyway, keep writing and update ASAP!
~TTA
6/28/2008 c1 raecheleatrhino
This is really, really good. I'm definitely interested in what happens next, as to how Angel will survive alone. I don't know if I'm missing something, but who's Nathan? As for the necklace, I'm definitely wondering... :)
This is really, really good. I'm definitely interested in what happens next, as to how Angel will survive alone. I don't know if I'm missing something, but who's Nathan? As for the necklace, I'm definitely wondering... :)
6/17/2008 c1 1Mignun
Whoa, I will tell you this, I love how it's written. It's like I'm actually watching a movie instead of reading a story. I love it.
The whole Angel thing is interesting, too. It seems like someone's after her and wants her dead...It's just cool.
You've written it well, and I really want to read the rest of this story. It intrigues me on how you are going to go with this story.
:)
Whoa, I will tell you this, I love how it's written. It's like I'm actually watching a movie instead of reading a story. I love it.
The whole Angel thing is interesting, too. It seems like someone's after her and wants her dead...It's just cool.
You've written it well, and I really want to read the rest of this story. It intrigues me on how you are going to go with this story.
:)
6/13/2008 c1 4firefly114
This is really mysterious, and sounds intriguing! it's a great idea, keep going with it, and I can't wait to read more!
This is really mysterious, and sounds intriguing! it's a great idea, keep going with it, and I can't wait to read more!