for Matryoshka6/14/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I have to say I don't know what a "Matryoshka" is. You might wanna put an a/n to explain that.
I do like the piece though. I love the description of the perfectly good daughter because it's so stereotypical. I also love the part about the ventricles because that was a really powerful
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612simpleplan13I have to say I don't know what a "Matryoshka" is. You might wanna put an a/n to explain that.
I do like the piece though. I love the description of the perfectly good daughter because it's so stereotypical. I also love the part about the ventricles because that was a really powerful
PS. If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (link in my profile) image.
6/12/2008 c1 012323232
i didn't know that a matryoshka was a stacking doll, but after i learned that, this makes much more sense. it is beautiful, angry and clever.
i didn't know that a matryoshka was a stacking doll, but after i learned that, this makes much more sense. it is beautiful, angry and clever.
6/9/2008 c1 22emmaliefje
Nice. I didn't understand it, but poetry isnt supposed to be understood all the time. I like it though. I'm wondering who Matryoshka is, or what she means. Well done!
22emmaliefjeNice. I didn't understand it, but poetry isnt supposed to be understood all the time. I like it though. I'm wondering who Matryoshka is, or what she means. Well done!