
9/3/2009 c1 my own prince
This is haunting. I mean, I'm so scared I'll fall to that sort of addiction because yes, I have a friend who's addicted to drugs now too. :(
This is haunting. I mean, I'm so scared I'll fall to that sort of addiction because yes, I have a friend who's addicted to drugs now too. :(
6/9/2008 c1
30J.N. Lloyd
This was a very well written poem, although I would suggest that you watch the pace in your verses so they do not fall out of rythm. The message was very raw, adn I'm sure many who read it can connect in some way. You should publish more poetry.

This was a very well written poem, although I would suggest that you watch the pace in your verses so they do not fall out of rythm. The message was very raw, adn I'm sure many who read it can connect in some way. You should publish more poetry.