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2/18/2012 c1 TheCakeEater
That was very beautiful. I love how you brought in the moon and magic. Very calming and peaceful. Thank you for writing and posting.

TheCakeEater
6/11/2008 c1 61Erlkoenigin
A very beautiful and comforting poem. I agree with you that dreams and memories of beautiful days can be a refuge.

P.S. Verzeih die Frage einer Ignorantin, die immer begierig ist, ihre brachliegenden Englischkenntnisse zu reaktivieren: warum nicht “the moon strikes, the clock ticks”?
6/10/2008 c1 1Kevin Miles
Safety resides in the mind... I love it.

The whole thing, the slow passing of life and time, getting away from you, unstoppable, yet okay at the same time.

Very well done.

Keep writing!

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Leafeus Agamemon

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