for Too Late1/19/2011 c1 
7Liya Smith
This was brief and so bittersweet. I kind of want another chapter or sequel but at the same time I don't. It has a good air of mystery to let the reader wonder what will happen next. The only grammatical/spelling (whatever) mistake I saw was: "She likes to pretend she's not effected"
Effected should be affected. I get these two wrong all the time though, but this time I checked. :)
7Liya SmithThis was brief and so bittersweet. I kind of want another chapter or sequel but at the same time I don't. It has a good air of mystery to let the reader wonder what will happen next. The only grammatical/spelling (whatever) mistake I saw was: "She likes to pretend she's not effected"
Effected should be affected. I get these two wrong all the time though, but this time I checked. :)
6/12/2008 c1 22BlorangeForever
Aww. Very evocative. I like the way you expressed the uncertainties we all feel in that weird line between dating and not dating.
22BlorangeForeverAww. Very evocative. I like the way you expressed the uncertainties we all feel in that weird line between dating and not dating.